pembie Posted June 5, 2017 Report Share Posted June 5, 2017 You could say that Dimitri had well and truly flew over the cuckoo's nest and far far beyond What a very strange lollipop man he was 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted June 5, 2017 Report Share Posted June 5, 2017 Wow.Okay, firstly: Heath's dead?! Part of me thinks there'll be a twist, part of me thinks that with everything you've put the characters through in this story you might have actually done it.We can be pretty sure Dimitri's dead, leaving Kyle and Josh to be saved by the most unlikely person possible.The guards are going to have a heck of a time explaining this one... 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted June 5, 2017 Report Share Posted June 5, 2017 (edited) Great chapter you currently know how to make a convincing/crazy story. I wonder if Heath is alive or like Pembie said maybe buried alive? I wonder what will happen to Josh and Kyle next. Update again soon Edited June 5, 2017 by Kristen Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted June 6, 2017 Report Share Posted June 6, 2017 Great two chapters Really intrigued about what is in the box that Smithy gave to Brax Wondering if Heath is alive or not...? You do write such great crazy but amazing stories Update soon please xx 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bijou Posted June 6, 2017 Report Share Posted June 6, 2017 You've got a knack for story writing can never tell where your gonna go with your your stories and that's what I like about it 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Suzza101 Posted June 7, 2017 Author Report Share Posted June 7, 2017 Great chapter, You are such an amazing writer I love reading what you write and can never wait until I read the next chapter. The poor boys! I'm excited but so so worried to see what will happen to Josh and Kyle next Haven't they been through enough. Really worried that Heath might be dead, I hope not. It would crush the whole family and Kyle will be heartbroken to know that he was trying to help him, Bianca and the baby!! I'm crossing my fingers that Heath is still alive and he stays that way. I cannot wait to read more, please update soon. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ludub Posted June 7, 2017 Report Share Posted June 7, 2017 (edited) 2 hours ago, Suzza101 said: Great chapter, You are such an amazing writer I love reading what you write and can never wait until I read the next chapter. On 2017-6-6 at 5:58 AM, bijou said: You've got a knack for story writing can never tell where your gonna go with your your stories and that's what I like about it On 2017-6-6 at 2:42 AM, ~JarlieFanEver~ said: You do write such great crazy but amazing stories On 2017-6-6 at 0:54 AM, Kristen said: you currently know how to make a convincing/crazy story Aww, thanks guys! That's really kind of you to say. I do try... I'm always a bit nervous with these more violent chapters that I'll scare people away. Glad you're still enjoying it. On 2017-6-5 at 11:57 PM, Red Ranger 1 said: Okay, firstly: Heath's dead?! Part of me thinks there'll be a twist, part of me thinks that with everything you've put the characters through in this story you might have actually done it. Would I kill one of my favourite characters? Hmmmm.... Guess you'll have to wait and see! Unfortunately, It'll probably be a few days before I have a new chapter. Thanks for reading everyone! Really appreciate all the encouragement! Edited June 7, 2017 by Ludub Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted June 7, 2017 Report Share Posted June 7, 2017 (edited) Would you kill one of your favourite Characters? You ask. hmmm I just don't know you have a few and they all seem to be in this very dangerous story Edited June 7, 2017 by pembie 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
christine king Posted June 7, 2017 Report Share Posted June 7, 2017 Wasn't expecting that, is Heath really dead? Hmm somehow I'm not convinced. You make an exciting story and I'm very impressed with your writing skill and talent, keep up the mystery! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted June 8, 2017 Report Share Posted June 8, 2017 Its just dawned on me that I was slightly mistaken when I said that you have all your favourite characters in this very dangerous story I can say without doubt that Matt won't die yes his safe at least well his abit driftwood at the minute.. Can you tell I'm abit too much into all this? 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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