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Rachel and Hugh

I read this before i read the fic and was like omg you brought Hugh back! But i see she meant Hugo :lol: Aww i was all excited for the Hughness. Laura find a way to do it and i'll always follow your fics :P

But great update. Poor Rachel her life is kinda sucky. But she still has Natasha right? Bring her in! hehe.

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I really like the way you are portraying Rachel. So she lost another baby? Dieing to see what happens with Charlie and Angelo and really liked the stuff with her and Joey previously.

I’ll have to make sure I read the first fanfic ASAP as I feel that there is stuff happening which refers to it which I'm missing out on.

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Thanks Kirsty, Slade, Dan, pam30 and Zoe :D

Chapter 4

“Where the hell have you been?”

“I told you, I was staying at a friends”

“OK so you’re saying that you left your own birthday party and went to a friends for three days and never told anyone?”

“Angelo, I’m telling the truth”

“OK then Charlie, why did you go to your friends?”

Charlie just stood there. She didn’t know what to say. She couldn’t tell him the truth, not now.

“Do I need a reason?”

“Charlie, I know you have been with another man”

It was now pitch black and the wind was quite strong. The wind was blowing in her face but Martha didn’t want to go home. She had walked this beach many times with Jack but now she was there alone, wondering how she will survive this without him. She felt empty inside. She just kept thinking that she grieved for Jack years ago and was wondering why she was feeling like this then. She had fallen in love with Roman and could see a future with him. She loves Roman, but does she want to be with him? The same question kept going over and over in her head. Of course I do. Stop being silly Martha. She told herself that its because of the cancer that she was doubting her feelings for Roman.

She carried on walking slowly up the beach. As she neared the Bait Shop, she noticed some lights on.


“Hello dear, what are you doing out on your own? Shouldn’t you be resting?”

“I just needed to be alone”

“How did Roman take the news love?”

“Well I haven’t told him yet”

She saw the look on his face and knew what he was about to say.

“Don’t worry. I will tell him soon”

“Whats stopping you? I would have thought you would have wanted his support”


“Martha, I know it’s hard but Jack’s gone. He will always be with you in your heart but its Roman your with now. He’s the one who’s going to be there for you and support you”

“I know. I’m just not sure how I feel about Roman anymore”

“Strewth love, I didn’t know you had been feeling like that”

“Martha, two weeks ago you were so happy and in love, and now?

“Things change, Grandad”

“I’m not lying to you Angelo. Why don’t you trust me?”

“Cause it wouldn’t be the first time you would have gone with someone else would it?”

“Angelo, that’s not fair. Nothing was right between us and it was a long time ago now. I thought we had gotten past this”

“So did I. Then you pulled this disappearing act. You can’t blame me for being suspicious”

“I know, but you have to trust me, I’m telling you…”

“No Charlie, I don’t have to trust you. You have given me no reason to”

She didn’t know what to say. She didn’t want to push him too far. She knew what he was capable of and this could push him to it.


“I think its best we talk about this in the morning, when you have calmed down”

SMASH. Angelo threw the glass what was on the side next to him at the wall.

“Hey, whats going on here?”

Joey appeared at the door.

“Oh no, Joey, what are you doing here?”

“I came back to make sure you were ok, and then I heard all the noise”

“You’ve been with her?”

“Joey please just go”

“No, I want to know exactly whats been going on”

“Angelo, please, you’re scaring her. And me”

“I’m not leaving you with him”

Charlie gave Joey a pleading look. She was worried for Joey and her self.

“OK I’m going. Call me if you need anything, Charlie”

“Ow, Angelo, let me go”

“Angelo just let her go”

He had Joey pushed at against the wall.

“OK listen, you have caused enough problems with us before OK so listen. Leave Charlie alone. Don’t contact her, don’t come near her. Because next time I might not be so nice”

He let her go and she bolted for the door.

“Angelo, don’t ever do that again. She hasn’t done anything”

He couldn’t even look at her. He didn’t mean to do that. He was just so angry and couldn’t control his temper. What is wrong with me?

“I’m going to bed, Charlie. See you in the morning”

“Hey Leah, can I speak to my lovely girlfriend?”

“Hugo, what are you on about?”

“Rachel. She’s at yours tonight right?”

“No I haven’t seen her”

“Oh OK. Maybe I heard her wrong. Can you let me know if you hear from her?”

“Yeah of course”

“Thanks. Bye”

“Yeah, bye Hugo”

Where the hell is she? He looked at his watch and it was 11:25pm.

“Can I buy you another drink?”

Rachel started giggling.

“I really shouldn’t…”

“Go on. Another one won’t hurt. Thought you came out to have a good time”

“OK then”

She had been sitting there all evening, talking to this guy whose name she couldnt even remember and she didn’t plan on leaving anytime soon.

Did Rachel make it home? And who has overheard Martha talking to her doctor?

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:o OMFG Angelo attacking poor Joey !!!

I like how you are bringing Angelo's unhingedness back into his character like when he went nuts at Belle with the chair.

Naughty Rachel - I hope she doesnt cheat on Hugo .

Please please update soon - I need to see what happens with Rachel and Hugo

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