-Kevin- Posted February 17, 2010 Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 Wow, cant believe it was Tasha that died, really thought it was gonna be Rachel , you really had me going " Oh no Rachels dead" I can see lots of trouble following this in Hugo & Rachels relationship. It could be the wakeup call for Rachel but I think it'll only send her further on a downward spiral ! So happy you updated your fic, I really enjoyed reading it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freckleface Posted February 17, 2010 Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 Yayy i'm glad you're continuing update soon please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danni02 Posted February 17, 2010 Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 Oh my I really thought you had killed Rachel! But Tasha...aw Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Barbara Posted February 17, 2010 Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 I thought you had killed Rachel, I never expected Tasha would be the one to die. Poor Hugo and Rachel! This is going to be so hard for them! I wonder who was the other woman who died and what she was doing in the house in the first place. Next chapter looks good. A JM kiss! More please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted February 17, 2010 Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 This is a good and sad, heart-touching chapter. Poor Rachel and Hugo. Losing Tasha More soon pleaseee ;) xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slade Posted February 20, 2010 Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 Ok sorry I didn’t post straight away but I’ve been busy with work and since it had been such a long time since the last update I needed to recap…Previously on Piece of me….. Anyway it was good reading through some of the chapters a second time. Karen’s note, taking Jack hostage, the gun, Roman getting shot, Martha and Jack bonding, Angelo coming to blows with Jack, Rachel relapsing and subsequently having her life turned upside down. I was shocked it was Tasha but arguably a good choice purely in terms of character development for Rachel and Hugo. It’s going to be difficult for their relationship to survive this. I’m also looking forward to finding out who the other person was who died in the fire. So that’s three deaths Jack’s indirectly responsible for. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danni02 Posted March 12, 2010 Report Share Posted March 12, 2010 Hope you update this soon, Laura, its really good! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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