Laura Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 Story Title: - Piece of me Type of story: Long Fic Main Characters: Martha, Roman, Jack, Rachel, Hugo, Charlie, Angelo BTTB rating: T Genre: Drama, Angst Does story include spoilers: No Any warnings: Nothing yet but will write a warning before a chapter if it’s needed. Summary: My version of the sequel to ‘Back to the Future’ Chapter 1 "We're all out of wine” Martha said " Don’t panic I will go and get it guys” Charlie said "I have to swing by the station afterwards anyway." Charlie left the party swiftly. 5 minutes later she arrived t the Surf Club car Park. She just followed the light coming from the surf .Suddenly she felt a force dragging her down and then a hand was over her mouth smothering her, and then she blacked out...... Argh! Gasping for breath, Charlie quickly sat up. It was the same nightmare Charlie had been having for the last 3 nights. Every time she closed her eyes, all she can remember is that night. All she could hear was the voice of her attacker. She felt dirty. She couldn’t get it out of her head. Knock, knock. Placing the mug on the kitchen side, Roman made his way to door. Looking at the clock, he thought to himself, who could be knocking at this time. It was 8:20 am. “Hi Angelo”. “Hi Roman, sorry it’s so early but I was wondering have you heard from Charlie at all? “No I haven’t mate. Is she still not home?” “No, all I have had was one text two days ago saying she’s ok and staying at a friends in the city and not to worry. She wont return any of my calls either.” “Look why don’t you come in Angelo, for a cup of tea and chat” “No I can’t Roman. I have work to get to now. Thanks anyway” “OK let me know if you hear anything” “K, I will. See ya.” The door handle turned and Charlie jumped. Everything noise and creek had been freaking her out. “Are you awake?” “Yeah just about” “I made you a cuppa. Thought you might like one”. “Thanks” She placed the mug on the beside table, and sat down on the bed. “Look Charlie, have you rang Angelo yet? “No not yet. I will, don’t worry”. “He’s going to be so worried about you”. “He’ll be fine. I sent him a text saying I was staying at a friends in the city” “You said you would ring him yesterday. Charlie, just rin...” “Look I will ring him when I like OK! Just get out. I want to be by myself.” Will Charlie return home? And who is she staying with? And will Martha finally tell Roman her secret? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SummerBayLocal Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 Off to a good start Laura! Please continue! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Kevin- Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 OMG Laura I love it !! Its so cool how were both having our own seperate angles on the story. I hope Charlies ok and I wonder whats going on . Its just so confusing and mysterious !! Pleaseeee update again soon , im loving it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emma Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 That's An Amazing Start Laura! Can't Wait To Read More Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
**Julie** Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 Great start Laura! Update soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KaiyaBlake Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 I love it Can't wait for more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 Good start, I really want to know who that was! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
j.laur5 Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 I love it Laura. Doing great Job so far. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Laura Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 Thanks David, Kevin, Emma, Julie, KaiyaBlake, Red Ranger 1 & j.laur5 I will update later on Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slade Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 This sounds really interesting. I haven’t read Back to the Future but I like the fact that you are very direct. I think I will definitely try and keep up with this one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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