Piece Of Me

[Inactive User]

Great work! Update soon (And yeah I am back from my family reunion)

[Red Ranger 1]

Oh gosh, good chapter, Martha, Charlie and Rachel all seem to be in a bad place and Angelo really lost it there.Looking forward to the next update.

[KirstyEkua]

Ohh dear Rachel!! Love what you're doing with her Where's her daughter though?

[Laura]

Thanks j.laur5, Kevin, Sarah, RR1 and Kirsty

Kirsty, her daughter is still there, just only had one mention so far. But there will be more stuff with her daughter later in this fic

[KaiyaBlake]

Angelo

Wonder who overhears Martha with her doctor!?

*tut tut* Rachel, what areee you doing?

Great Chapter. Can't wait for more

[angelsdawn]

Hi Laura

Am loving this so far!

I'm interested in seeing where you take the story with Rachel, and love the fact that Charlie has gone running to Joey when things have gotten tough.

Am also pleased that someone has written a story which includes "crazed" Angelo - harping back to his behaviour with Belle on the show.

Anyway, I'll keep reading - you've caught my interest.

xxx

[steff99]

I love reading this fic it is really good Laura

I hope Rachel doesnt cheat! I cant wait to see what happens with Charlie Angelo and Joey Update soon

[zifiso]

Just read the whole fiction, it's really good!!

As much as i'm not liking Angelo's behavior, i kind of feel sorry for him, he doen't have the best luck when it comes to girls

Can't wait to find out what direction you are taking Rachel

Who head Martha's conversation?

Update soon!

[Laura]

Thanks KaiyaBlake, angelsdawn, Steff and zifiso

Will update either tonight or tomorrow

[Barbara]

I just read the whole thing.

All the couples have issues. I really hope they'll (at least one of them) manage to resolve their problems.

Angelo scared me. He's being so aggressive.

I hope Rachel won't make a mistake and she'll go home asap. Poor Hugo!

Martha should tell Roman what's going on and how she feels.

More please.