Red Ranger 1 Posted May 7, 2017 Report Share Posted May 7, 2017 It's very in character for Kyle to lose it and then feel bad afterwards.Agent Lee is quite obviously busking it and doesn't have any control of the situation at all.Just about everything seems to be on a knife edge here... 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted May 7, 2017 Report Share Posted May 7, 2017 Great chapter Poor Brax and Ash waiting for something bad to happen to Heath. Poor Kyle I hope the boys didn't muck up the deal for Heath's sake. Update again soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ludub Posted May 7, 2017 Report Share Posted May 7, 2017 41 minutes ago, Red Ranger 1 said: It's very in character for Kyle to lose it and then feel bad afterwards. Thanks Red, I'm glad you think so! Kyle always had a short temper, but also a very strong set of moral values. I don't think he'd be okay with beating someone to death, no matter what they'd done to him... but he might just lose it completely and do it without meaning to. 41 minutes ago, Red Ranger 1 said: Agent Lee is quite obviously busking it and doesn't have any control of the situation at all. Yeah, he wouldn't inspire much trust, would he? 38 minutes ago, Kristen said: Poor Brax and Ash waiting for something bad to happen to Heath. Yeah, I don't think either of them would deal all that well with how powerless this would make them feel. Thanks for reading guys Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted May 8, 2017 Report Share Posted May 8, 2017 Smithy maybe a little unhinged but if he can see the murderous little glint in Josh's eye I don't think he should push him that much because I would think his very high on Josh's hit list.. Its good to know Kyle might feel bad for nearly killing Jae. But look on the the bright side he might have impressed the Duck haha Agent Lee who it seems is just winging it. Brax and the angry pouting lunging blonde might have to sort this mess out themselves.. Who would have guessed that the Feds would be utterly useless? 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted May 8, 2017 Report Share Posted May 8, 2017 Great chapter So worried for Kyle and Josh. Hoping they doesn't mess up the deal Looking forwards to the next chapter 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bijou Posted May 8, 2017 Report Share Posted May 8, 2017 With the last chapter for some reason I thought the story was gonna take a different direction so glad it was wrong can't wait for more 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KIMIF1 Posted May 8, 2017 Report Share Posted May 8, 2017 Have just caught up as haven't really looked on here before but found this a compelling read from the start. One or two things I have found a bit hard to take but I think you are doing a great job. Looking forward to whatever happens next thank-you. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ludub Posted May 8, 2017 Report Share Posted May 8, 2017 (edited) 1 hour ago, KIMIF1 said: Have just caught up as haven't really looked on here before but found this a compelling read from the start. One or two things I have found a bit hard to take but I think you are doing a great job. Looking forward to whatever happens next thank-you. Thanks KIMIF1! Really pleased you're enjoying it and really appreciate you taking the time to comment. I put a lot of time into these stories so it's really lovely to get feedback. Thank you! This is a much darker story than I've ever written before, so I can understand that there are probably some bits that go a bit too far. You probably didn't expect a Home and Away Fanfic to be like this? It's darker than I originally intended, although to be fair, my stories are always pretty dark. Writing a story in this way is hard because you can't go back and change things if you change your mind (not really) so you end up going down paths you didn't necessarily intend at the outset. In any case, I'm glad I haven't scared you off! Haha! Thanks for reading! x Edited May 8, 2017 by Ludub Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ludub Posted May 8, 2017 Report Share Posted May 8, 2017 14 hours ago, pembie said: Who would have guessed that the Feds would be utterly useless? Haha! This is pretty in keeping with the show, isn't it? Get the Feds involved and you just know it isn't going to end well! 15 hours ago, pembie said: Its good to know Kyle might feel bad for nearly killing Jae. But look on the the bright side he might have impressed the Duck haha Trust you to find the silver lining! 13 hours ago, ~JarlieFanEver~ said: So worried for Kyle and Josh. Hoping they doesn't mess up the deal You'll have to wait and see! 9 hours ago, bijou said: With the last chapter for some reason I thought the story was gonna take a different direction so glad it was wrong Glad I'm not too predictable then! haha! Thanks for reading folks. I'll update as soon as I can x 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
christine king Posted May 9, 2017 Report Share Posted May 9, 2017 Just catching up, that was pretty dark hey no surprise the feds are useless though! I hope everyone will manage on their own but time will tell. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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