Inactive User Posted April 16, 2017 Report Share Posted April 16, 2017 Great chapter Interesting twist that Ash hates drugs Hoping the deal better go well Update soon please xx 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bijou Posted April 19, 2017 Report Share Posted April 19, 2017 (edited) Great chapter hoping it all goes well however I'm expecting twists and turns as usual can't wait for the next chapter Edited April 19, 2017 by bijou 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Suzza101 Posted April 20, 2017 Author Report Share Posted April 20, 2017 (edited) Great chapter, Poor Kyle and Josh they are both really struggling. Now Kyle has been raped... things aren't getting any better for these boys and i doubt that Kyle will want to talk about it at all and i thing that will only break him more. Him crying to the image he is seeing of Aaron apologising for betraying him was heartbreaking. I don't think that things are going to get easier for josh either especially now that he is cutting I just hope that these two will be there for eachother because if one goes the other will be targeted and hurt even more. They need eachother to survive this. I liked the fact that you added in that Ash hates drugs. And I can't wait to read more. I'm absolutely loving it. Please update soon. Edited April 20, 2017 by Suzza101 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ludub Posted April 20, 2017 Report Share Posted April 20, 2017 Thanks for the lovely comments, folks! It wasn't the happiest of chapters but then I like my misery, don't I?! Am I wrong about Ash hating drugs? I was pretty sure that Ash was anti drugs but now I'm wondering if I've missed something? I know he supplied Duncan's wife with some weed but it was for medical reasons and because he remembered how much his mum had suffered with her cancer. I thought there was a whole thing with Billie where he said how much he hated drugs? But maybe I'm imagining that? I also thought that it was the reason for the falling out with Gunno. Didn't Ash rat on Gunno about his drug smuggling operation in the prison? And then ended up being a courier to protect Brax? Hmm.... Maybe I've got that wrong? Oh well, if I'm wrong then I guess things are different in this reality! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted April 20, 2017 Report Share Posted April 20, 2017 I might be making this up again But I think it has something to do with Billie's ex Dean or was it Sam I don't remember which weren't they are drugs or something it was either that or Billie was being abused I remember Brax and Ash hunting for Dean down in the mines to try a find Billie or something like that Wasn't Brax framed for Dean's murder by Sam? As I said before far to many drug stories on the show they all kind of melt into one haha Well look forward to your next chapter 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted April 20, 2017 Report Share Posted April 20, 2017 3 hours ago, Ludub said: Am I wrong about Ash hating drugs? I was pretty sure that Ash was anti drugs but now I'm wondering if I've missed something? I know he supplied Duncan's wife with some weed but it was for medical reasons and because he remembered how much his mum had suffered with her cancer. I thought there was a whole thing with Billie where he said how much he hated drugs? But maybe I'm imagining that? I also thought that it was the reason for the falling out with Gunno. Didn't Ash rat on Gunno about his drug smuggling operation in the prison? And then ended up being a courier to protect Brax? Hmm.... Maybe I've got that wrong? Oh well, if I'm wrong then I guess things are different in this reality! No, that seems pretty accurate.I can't really remember any discussion with Billie about it, but he did definitely put a stop to Gunno's drug dealing simply on moral grounds and was unhappy about the courier thing, pretty much hating the fact that he was expected to keep a bag of drugs overnight. 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ludub Posted April 20, 2017 Report Share Posted April 20, 2017 2 hours ago, Red Ranger 1 said: No, that seems pretty accurate.I can't really remember any discussion with Billie about it, but he did definitely put a stop to Gunno's drug dealing simply on moral grounds and was unhappy about the courier thing, pretty much hating the fact that he was expected to keep a bag of drugs overnight. Thanks Red, that's what I thought But then I thought maybe there was something I was missing... At least I'm not going mad, haha! 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
christine king Posted April 25, 2017 Report Share Posted April 25, 2017 Just catching up a lot! So much misery although they say misery loves company right? Lots of surprising twists and turns and you weave an interesting story, very well played. I'm excited for the next chapter, can't wait to read it 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted April 25, 2017 Report Share Posted April 25, 2017 Love the fact that Josh and Kyle didn't put it past Brax to rat himself out because he needed more than toy cars in his life.. Hmmm Abit of foreshadowing there at the start with Bianca sending Heath all those happy baby and chocolate cake photos methinks Heath won't be there for a the 3D baby scan either.. I have never heard of those My 3D imagey isn't that great are they impressive? Oh yeah back to the chapter so..............in short the inspector clouseau in me says that something bad has happened to Heath.. Heath can step forward his time of suffering begins now Very good update 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted April 25, 2017 Report Share Posted April 25, 2017 Loved the characterisation of Heath as someone who'd rather just be at home with his family and forget all about this drug dealer nonsense.I'm not sure he'd just walk out on Brax though...It seems like the plan is unravelling and that's even without Brax having found someone else he wants to "have words" with. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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