Red Ranger 1 Posted March 17, 2017 Report Share Posted March 17, 2017 Even in jail there's an old guy complaining about those youngsters messing up his lawn.Guess twenty years inside, there's not much to do except learn to fold sheets right.So, looks like the net might be closing around Smithy... 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ludub Posted March 17, 2017 Report Share Posted March 17, 2017 24 minutes ago, bijou said: I never really liked Josh when he was on the show but you've made him likeable in this story congratulations on that Thanks Bijou! It's funny. I've always loved Josh but I think I write him quite differently from how he was on the show. I think I've kind of latched on to the scared and vulnerable Josh that we only saw for a few brief weeks when he was blind. That blindness storyline (before they went and ruined it ) caught my attention for some reason, and is actually the whole reason that I started writing in the first place. It just sparked something in my imagination. He's been my muse for a lot of my stories as a result. I'm glad you like my version better! 6 minutes ago, Red Ranger 1 said: So, looks like the net might be closing around Smithy... 2 hours ago, Kristen said: Wonder what will happen next with Smithy and Johnno. Yeah, things might not be looking so good for Smithy... but you'll have to wait and see... 10 minutes ago, Red Ranger 1 said: Even in jail there's an old guy complaining about those youngsters messing up his lawn.Guess twenty years inside, there's not much to do except learn to fold sheets right. There's no denying that people in this prison are weird! Josh has an awful lot to contend with! ...If they're not crazy sexual predators, or just plain crazy and talking to themselves, then they're getting their knickers in a twist about the correct way to fold sheets He can't catch a break can he?! Thanks for reading peeps x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted March 18, 2017 Report Share Posted March 18, 2017 Great chapter Aww feel for Josh-he seems to be doing it rough Really wondering what is going to happen next with Smithy and Johnno Update soon please xx 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted March 20, 2017 Report Share Posted March 20, 2017 My goodness Frank the bore Mr Oh look I have folded six sheets while insulting you banged on just a tiny abit there didn't he? .At least Kwon came and brightened things up for Josh with showing him his badass scar That's the one thing about scars always good to show off As for Kyle I do worry that he will end up in the funny farm if he doesn't stop talking or shouting at Aaron 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted March 21, 2017 Report Share Posted March 21, 2017 Great chapter Brax as some sort of drug dealer and smuggling drugs almost like the people struggling storyline with Hugo. Poor Josh I feel so sorry for him glad he didn't take the drugs. Update again soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted March 21, 2017 Report Share Posted March 21, 2017 (edited) Ok so this Smithy story is somewhat complicated not going to lie Maybe I'm just abit dim.. Somehow I think Smithy will feel abit let down when he realises Brax isn't as bad as Walter White..haha I expect his going to try and blackmail the Braxtons somehow for drugs or to be part of The Braxton's none existence drug operation ? Edited March 21, 2017 by pembie 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted March 21, 2017 Report Share Posted March 21, 2017 Smithy does seem to have been handed the wrong end of the stick.And Josh has managed to get himself in a pickle again...Nice to see Dmitri back handing out helpful advice. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bijou Posted March 21, 2017 Report Share Posted March 21, 2017 3 hours ago, pembie said: Ok so this Smithy story is somewhat complicated not going to lie Maybe I'm just abit dim.. Somehow I think Smithy will feel abit let down when he realises Brax isn't as bad as Walter White..haha I expect his going to try and blackmail the Braxtons somehow for drugs or to be part of The Braxton's none existence drug operation ? I couldn't imagine Brax being as smart as Heisenberg but I must say I'll be amusing when he that finds out 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ludub Posted March 21, 2017 Report Share Posted March 21, 2017 (edited) 4 hours ago, pembie said: Somehow I think Smithy will feel abit let down when he realises Brax isn't as bad as Walter White..haha 52 minutes ago, bijou said: I couldn't imagine Brax being as smart as Heisenberg but I must say I'll be amusing when he that finds out Yeah, I can't quite imagine Brax wearing that little black hat either! or being 'the one that knocks', haha! Still, Smithy hasn't met him yet so he doesn't know that! 6 hours ago, Kristen said: Poor Josh I feel so sorry for him glad he didn't take the drugs. 1 hour ago, Red Ranger 1 said: And Josh has managed to get himself in a pickle again... Out of the frying pan, into the fire eh?! It never ends, does it? Thanks for reading folks! Edited March 21, 2017 by Ludub Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Suzza101 Posted March 23, 2017 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2017 Great chapter. Interesting idea as Brax as a drug dealer, I'm really glad that josh didn't take the drugs. I hope that him and Kyle will be safe but I fear that the worst isn't over, can't wait to read more please update soon. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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