Red Ranger 1 Posted January 4, 2013 Report Share Posted January 4, 2013 Charlie telling Noah he had to sleep in his own bed if he wanted a brother made me smile.Ruby could very well be shooting herself in the foot by being coy with April, even if April doesn't seem to be that into Violet.I'm really liking the way you're writing all the relationships in this, it feels very realistic. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted January 4, 2013 Author Report Share Posted January 4, 2013 Great chapter I agree with RR1-liked the way you are writing the relationships in this fanfiction. Update soon xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JosieTash Posted January 4, 2013 Report Share Posted January 4, 2013 I don’t know if April’s deliberately doing it, but this whole Violet thing reminds me of Gypsy trying to make Shelley jealous by kissing etc Desiree!!!! REALLY enjoyed that, most especially ….. “Have I missed curfew?” Charlie questioned. “You don’t have a curfew,” Brax screwed his face up. “I just didn’t expect you to be gone as long, that’s all.” “I was just catching up with Bianca,” Charlie answered as she began to undress herself to get ready for bed. “It’s not a problem, is it?” “No,” Brax shook his head as he watched his wife taking her bra off and laying it on the chair in the corner of the room before putting her singlet top on. “Oh,” Noah scratched the side of his head. “I get a baby brother?” Noah questioned as Charlie tucked him in. “If you want a baby brother you’ll definitely have to sleep in your own bed.” Charlie mumbled. “Huh?” Noah scrunched his face up, not quite understanding what his mother was saying. “I mean she’s nice and I enjoyed the kiss, but...” April pursed her lips together. “I eh....” April looked at Ruby and couldn’t quite decide what her eyes were trying to say. Of course she was still in love with her best friend, and she was pretty sure the moments happened and they weren’t just in her mind, but she had no idea how Ruby felt about it. “Would you be okay with it?” “Me?” Ruby tried to look confused as to why April would ask her this, but inside she wanted to scream no, of course she wouldn’t be okay with April seeing Violet. Not when April confessed to liking her and not when Ruby was having some sort of feelings back, but she was with Romeo and she was straight, as far as everyone was aware, and Ruby herself believed she was straight too. “It doesn’t have anything to do with me.” Ruby answered. “Just, you know, with what happened yesterday and with -” “What happened yesterday?” Ruby questioned. Of course she knew fine well what April was taking about but she still needed to work out what they meant herself first before she started playing with April’s feelings. The last thing she wanted to do was hurt her, especially because April had already confessed to liking her, she had to be 100% sure before she said anything back to her. “I don’t recall anything.” “Right, no, sorry,” April shook her head as she drank the last of her orange juice. “I’m going to go for a shower.” April picked up her phone before leaving the kitchen. Ruby watched as she walked away before hitting her hand against her head as she sighed in frustration, knowing she’d have to sort her feelings out quickly, because she may be about to lose to April to Violet. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted January 5, 2013 Report Share Posted January 5, 2013 Great chapter Woah Heath was going to propose before Rocco died didn't see that coming and I hope Ruby will be okay with April and Violet update again soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spotd1 Posted January 5, 2013 Report Share Posted January 5, 2013 Great chapter! Can't wait for the paternity results to come back! Thought Noah was adorable and loved Charlies comment about a baby brother!! Please update soon! Xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beebee Posted January 5, 2013 Report Share Posted January 5, 2013 please have the paternity results come back soon ... & have Brax not be the dad ... Please :-) Had to chuck at Charlie's comment to Connor if he wanted a baby brother lol More soon ... Please xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freakie42 Posted January 5, 2013 Report Share Posted January 5, 2013 Great chapter! I hope Ruby makes up her mind soon, or it might be too late Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted January 6, 2013 Author Report Share Posted January 6, 2013 Great chapter Poor Charlie! Must be hard for her to see Brax and baby Katie bonding (hopefully the results better say he's not the father...) Whoa Ruby broke up with Romeo! If he knew the truth why she broke up with him....so he will soon find out somehow Update soon xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beebee Posted January 6, 2013 Report Share Posted January 6, 2013 Great update! Didn't expect Ruby to break up with Romeo so soon ... Wow! My fingers are crossed hoping that Chax are ok xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Zoe~ Posted January 6, 2013 Report Share Posted January 6, 2013 Great chapters. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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