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Another amazing update. I love that he held her in the end. I love that he may not be as angry as before but things are still tense between them. It's very realsitic. I was afraid for a second that he was going to forgive and forget, I want that to happen but now would have been to soon. Also it's interesting to watch Belle not know how to act atound Aden. It's a big change from how she usually is around him.

Please update soon.

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As you already know i absolutely LOVE this chapter!

The descriptions are so vivid and detailed, unbelievable writing hun!!

I love the way you show Aden still being mad at her but at the same time unable to not care about her

Roman (aka HOTDAD :D ) what can i say? he really is the voice of reason isnt he! the way you brought him into was a stroke of genius

Brilliant, Brilliant, Brilliant :D

Of course theres such a thing as fluffy angst! your doing it now! especially in the last chapter :D

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