The Boy With The Thorn In His Side (by monkeysmoke) - comments

[MissOlivia22]

The scene with Aden and his dad was so sad...

I love Roman in this fic. Any chance of an update again tonight. Need to know whether to charge my ds for a little sly internet access...

[monkeysmoke]

The scene with Aden and his dad was so sad...

I love Roman in this fic. Any chance of an update again tonight. Need to know whether to charge my ds for a little sly internet access...

haha

well i'm in the middle of writing the next chapter. so, maybe a short one will be up later? Maybe....

xx

p.s. who doesn't love Roman?

[LAURZY!]

Well you were right about needing kleenex!!!

That was so so good and it was beautifully written!

I dont know how you keep writing so many updates, they just get better and better. Thankyou very much

Fantastic yet very emotional update lol

[xknomex]

Wow that was one amazing chapter... *wipes tears away*

I was ok till the song! I am now in floods...

How do you write like that!?!?

poor poor kirsty and Ollie.. poor Ollie. He'd better not die!

wow

xxxx

[Taniya_K]

Firstly - I love that song, and the meaning behind it relates to this so badly.

Secondly, such a great chapter, as always. I love the way you captures both Kirsty and Belle's emotions. Especially Kirsty about no wanting to make it all real. Loved Belle's musing about God and life. And about why she hated Kirsty.

More soon please! I just want Ollie to get better

xoxo

[wrongturntaken]

Wow... when you described the children in the unit it was so sad, had me in tears. That was so emtional i can't even put exclamation marks in this comment because i don't feel it's appropriate.

Amazing chapter once again.

Please update soon?

(notice the lack of emoticon too, not because it doens't merit one, just because i'd feel bad if i were to smile at such a sad chapter) i would also lol there if i thought it was appropriate...

[Inactive User]

Great chapters. Hope Ollie better survive-he can't die!

Update soon

[whispered_envy]

Wow. That was an amazing last couple of chapters. The scenes between Larry/Aden and Kirsty/Belle were so intense, so emotional...I loved them both.

[Taniya_K]

LMAO! I loved it! A light chapter was exactly what the doctor ordered!

Lol at Nicole's redecorations, and her drinking. Loved Aden's remarks and critisms. Aw, he just better stay away from Nicole! He loves Belle, remember?

xoxo

[monkeysmoke]

LMAO! I loved it! A light chapter was exactly what the doctor ordered!

Lol at Nicole's redecorations, and her drinking. Loved Aden's remarks and critisms. Aw, he just better stay away from Nicole! He loves Belle, remember?

xoxo

oh does he really? anything goes in the world of fanfiction remember! Watch this space xxx