The Boy With The Thorn In His Side (by monkeysmoke) - comments

[wrongturntaken]

Love love loved those last two chapters!!! I loved Annie's thinking at the end!

The last one was sweet, funny, charming, endearing, sad, passionate, compassionate, and many other emotions that you included so well! I love how you've included this Gladys character, she gives Aden and Belle a lot to work with and Aden was so funny at the end! I was just wondering if Belle actually heard that bit though???

Please update soon????

[whispered_envy]

Aww that last line from Annie was perfect! You are such a good writer!

That last chapter...had the right amount of sadness to lightheartedness! I hope if Kane isn't a match Aden offers to give it a try...love Gladys...shes a perfect bit of comical relief!

Edited October 23, 2008 by whispered_envy

[Inactive User]

Yah another chapter! Loved it. I agree with everyone-you are a amazing writer. Update soon

[MissOlivia22]

Hehe. Gladys XD

Update soon ?

[xknomex]

Once again the last line was brilliant. "this is not about me" such a strong line!!!!

A brilliant, beautiful and emotional chapter. The way you described how Kane and Kirsty were feeling and Miles for that matter.

Hope Kane is a match.

Love the fic

Update soon

xxx

[LAURZY!]

Awww so emotional!

A really great update, loved how you described how everyone was feeling, very well written

[MissOlivia22]

Yay an update. Loved the ending

Now, back to geography coursework.... Due in tomorrow XD

Update soon ?

[Taniya_K]

Gosh, poor Miles! I agree with xknomex, that line was powerful, and the bit where he wished it would sink in. Loved those last lines of yours!

So emotional! I hope Kane's a match, but I think that would be too easy, right?

More soon please?!

xoxo

[monkeysmoke]

Yay an update. Loved the ending

Now, back to geography coursework.... Due in tomorrow XD

Update soon ?

ouch geography coursework - that's painful!

[Aden+Belle forever]

Chapter 62 – Such an emotion chapter, I feel so sorry for Kane and Kirsty, and Miles as it, it must be so hard for him

Good to see Kane in the story though

Please update soon