The Boy With The Thorn In His Side (by monkeysmoke) - comments

[xknomex]

hahahah Poor Roman. He is going to have a lot of fun with Aden and Nicole

I really enjoyed that put a smile on my face

oh yeah and what Tanyia said. Aden loves Belle, not Nicole hehe

xxx

[LAURZY!]

Lmao at Nicole

Great update

And yes.....Aden loves Belle!!!! dont forget that lol Nicole is not right for him

[Aden+Belle forever]

Chapter 56 – That chapter was so sad, poor Ollie, poor Kirsty and poor Belle. The song at the end was a perfect choice

Chapter 57 – The way you right humour after such an emotion chapter is just, wow. Such a funny chapter, I can just imagine Roman and Aden’s faces when they walked into the house

And to add to what has already been said, Aden loves Belle

Please update soon

[MissOlivia22]

Tehe. I can just imagine their faces when they came into the room XD

Watch this space xxx

Does that mean another update ?

[Taniya_K]

LMAO! I loved it! A light chapter was exactly what the doctor ordered!

Lol at Nicole's redecorations, and her drinking. Loved Aden's remarks and critisms. Aw, he just better stay away from Nicole! He loves Belle, remember?

xoxo

oh does he really? anything goes in the world of fanfiction remember! Watch this space xxx

Yes he does! You know it, we know, even Aden and Belle know it, and their fictional!

Oooh, can't wait for another update. Just don't make me sad... please?

Btw, I only just saw that you posted this bit now, sorry!

[wrongturntaken]

lmao off at Nicole's redecorating! I'm glad Aden was being more light hearted with Roman and Nicole, it was nice to see a bit of that and you worked Roman's attitudes about parenting in really well, Nicole's character came across really well in this chapter!

Please update soon! like now?

[Taniya_K]

Poor Ollie! But yay Kirsty's a match, but something tells me it ain't gonna be that easy. Actually, something tells me that

Aden's going to be the perfect match

. I dunno why, but it's just an inkling I've got!

Cannot wait for more! Please let Ollie be ok!

xoxo

[xknomex]

Thanks so much for the update it was brilliant!

Poor Kirsty!

I hope they find someone. I have a weird feeling that Aden might be the one who donates, I dont know why its just a feeling.

Update soon

xxxx

Edited October 20, 2008 by xknomex

[MissOlivia22]

Ive tought for a little while that

Aden might be her actual son. We haven't found out what happened to his mother, and she felt the need to protect him like a mother. Which makes me agree with Knome that he might be the donor

.....

Update soon

[xknomex]

Ive tought for a little while that

Aden might be her actual son. We haven't found out what happened to his mother, and she felt the need to protect him like a mother. Which makes me agree with Knome that he might be the donor

.....

Update soon

ooo thats a good Idea. all these questions and no answers lol

oh and you can call me Naomi.

Edited October 20, 2008 by xknomex