Red Ranger 1 Posted May 21, 2009 Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 Good chapter, loved Nicole being there for Aden.Sean turning up at the end was a real shock. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jen Posted May 21, 2009 Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 Another good chapter. Aden getting drunk so he didn't have to deal, was very realistic. And I'm glad it was Nicole who got him down. Take care Aden, enjoy life, raise our daughter well and I love.... “I love...” It was cut off, Aden looked confusedly. “Belle, where’s the rest?” Aden asked out loud. “I love....”I love....” Aden spoke as if he was talking to the letter itself. ^ I adored this bit particularly. A half written letter is always tough. (Being a Harry Potter fan, I immediately thought of the letter by Lily that Harry found at Grimmauld Place - but that's not really relevant here). Still, what I'm trying to say, is that you never quite know how the other person was going to finish, you kind of just need to figure it out for yourself. Like - so close, yet so far. I'm not sure if any of that made much sense, and I'm probably over-analysing your story. But I really liked that part. Bringing Sean back was a nice twist too. Keep up the good work. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
adellejefferiesxox Posted May 21, 2009 Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 Thanks Jen, yer I've haven't read the Harry Potter books (head down in shame) lol. I watch the movies though! And yes your post made sense, and I like it when people analyse my fics It's good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
**Julie** Posted May 21, 2009 Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 (edited) Awww Poor Aden. Loved how Nicole was there for Aden. Sean coming back was definitely unexpected. Another brilliant chapter. Can't wait to read more. Edited May 21, 2009 by **Julie** Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KaiyaBlake Posted May 21, 2009 Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 Aden Seans back? That can't be good. Especially the way he was acting to Leah! Loved it. Can't wait for more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack+martha=trooluvv Posted May 21, 2009 Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 Aden Nicole is so nice, I'm glad she stopped Aden from jumping And Sean Don't like HIM already Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Zoe~ Posted May 21, 2009 Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 Just read the whole fiction Aden Its good that Nicole talked him down, and that she stopped him from jumping Sean coming back, that was unexpected. Loved it, looking forward to reading more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taniya_K Posted May 21, 2009 Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 Whoa, thank God for Nicole! Never thought Aden would try that, but I'm glad she talked him down. Esp for Adelle's sake Poor guy though. And that letter from Belle was great too. I really hope she was going to say 'I love you' too. Sean at the end was I hope he doesn't cause trouble! Cannot wait for more! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
adellejefferiesxox Posted May 22, 2009 Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 Thanks guys, I'm relieved you liked the last chapter. I'm not sure when I'll update next because I have to work and I'm too tired to write it right now (Just finished work). I'm just dying to write another chapter though I've got plenty of ideas. Also if you think the drama is over, ya wrong . It's still gonna get worse. I know I'm evil! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack+martha=trooluvv Posted May 24, 2009 Report Share Posted May 24, 2009 First comment, yay! That chapter wasn't crappy at all, btw. And. Oh. My. God. That was so UNFAIR and MEAN! They didn't have any solid proof that he raped that chick. *worries* Update soon! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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