matticus01 Posted May 13, 2009 Report Share Posted May 13, 2009 Loved it Lily-G I loved how Aden had a go at Nicole over the flashing necklace and Adelle's epilepsy! Great chapter, cant wait for me update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
**Julie** Posted May 13, 2009 Report Share Posted May 13, 2009 Another brilliant chapter. I loved it once again. Can't wait to read more. Update soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KaiyaBlake Posted May 13, 2009 Report Share Posted May 13, 2009 (edited) “Whatever....this is about that jerk Aden isn’t it, well you know what you don’t deserve him” ooh I think someone had a crushh!? Kidding! Kinda sad he's gone. I mean, now he won't be getting in the way of them (I know, I said it ) But poor Liam! Aden's funny Hope him and Belle spend more time together. Loved it. Can't wait for more Edited May 13, 2009 by KaiyaBlake Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
adellejefferiesxox Posted May 13, 2009 Report Share Posted May 13, 2009 Whatever....this is about that jerk Aden isn’t it, well you know what you don’t deserve him” ooh I think someone had a crushh!? HAHAHA!! I never thought about it that way, take your mind out of the gutter I didn't really want to kill Liam off but I didn't want to drag Liam/Aden/Belle love triangle on forever & I felt like this is something Liam would do (kill himself). Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amz89 Posted May 13, 2009 Report Share Posted May 13, 2009 loved ot well done Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted May 13, 2009 Report Share Posted May 13, 2009 Liked the characterisation of Annie, it seemed just like her.Thought Aden overreacted a bit with Nicole but it's nice that he's protective of Adelle.Hmm, Belle has a new male friend.Interested to see where you go with that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taniya_K Posted May 13, 2009 Report Share Posted May 13, 2009 Aw, poor innocent Annie Loved it, once again. That letter by Liam was just too sad. But I'm glad that he forgave her, and told her not to balme herself. I know it owuld take a bit more than that to stop her from feeling guilty, but it's a start. Still can't believe Liam's dead Aden and Adelle Always! They're just tooooo cute together! He's such a great father in this fic, it's amazing! And the way Belle is around Aden is brilliantly done too. You can tell that there's unresolved feelings there, yet she's trying to distance herself from it all. I wonder what this Tyler dude is going to bring to the equation now. Cannot wait for more!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
adellejefferiesxox Posted May 14, 2009 Report Share Posted May 14, 2009 Thanks guys I wonder what this Tyler dude is going to bring to the equation now. I was using that mini scene as a way to convey that Belle is unsure of her relationship with Aden, Aden's not her boyfriend but she doesn't see him as just a friend. "This is MY ADEN" Belle still has an emotional/spritial connection with Aden, so I used that as a way to convey that message (ie. introducing Aden to an old friend). But who knows, I could see Tyler in the future Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stephanie Posted May 14, 2009 Report Share Posted May 14, 2009 (edited) Another good chapter! Loved Liam's suicide note, thought it was very realistic in terms of his state of mind. Looking forward to more. Edited May 14, 2009 by drama_girl Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
adellejefferiesxox Posted May 14, 2009 Report Share Posted May 14, 2009 Sorry guys I won't be able to update for a couple of days, I will be working Probably the next update will be in 4 days. Stay tune Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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