adellejefferiesxox Posted May 25, 2009 Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 Thanks Jen - spread the love Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
**Julie** Posted May 25, 2009 Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 Loved the ending. I'm so glad Aden got out of jail and was able to find Adelle. I loved the interaction between them at the end. Hope to read more of your fics in the future. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
matticus01 Posted May 25, 2009 Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 I'm so proud of you You made my day I loved that ending, it couldn't get anymore perfect, even if you tried, well maybe keeping Belle alive but still, a beautiful ending to a beautiful story Well done! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John Posted May 25, 2009 Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 A really well thought out ending. I really liked your descriptions of the feeling of love. It was also great to see that Aden and Belle's daughter actually returned to at least one of her parents. Well done. I look forward to what you are going to write about next. John H Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Zoe~ Posted May 25, 2009 Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 That ending was really good Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
adellejefferiesxox Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 Aww thanks guys. You're too sweet Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amz89 Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 loved the end so adorable. Great fic this was. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 Caught up on those last two chapters and I've enjoyed this story, you took some very brave decisions and the title was very appropriate, almost every chapter seemed to have some shock.And you did a good job of having Aden make himself look guilty when we knew he wasn't.But if I'm brutally honest, I found the ending, with Aden seemingly kidnapping his daughter from the orphanage and going on the run, to be somewhat bittersweet.On the whole, though, a good story and thanks for writing it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
adellejefferiesxox Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 Aww thanks Some of those decisions were planned others were the spur of moment thing. For example I didn't plan on Adelle suffering from Epilepsy. I didn't plan on having Belle dying in her sleep, I think I wanted her to die on the beach in Aden's arms oh well Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amz89 Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 beautiful lily Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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