LAURZY! Posted December 29, 2008 Report Share Posted December 29, 2008 WOW! absolutely loved it!! I hope he does let her see Jamie eventually, he is her sone afterall, and her having post natal depression isnt her fault! I really dont like Kirsty and she hasnt been in it properly yet Loved the flashback very sweet! Very well written Brill update Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taniya_K Posted December 29, 2008 Report Share Posted December 29, 2008 Oooh, so that's why she left. Interesting... I agree, I hope she gets to see him. I can see her talking to Jamie at school or something random like that out of desperation. Poor Aden though. He must really have been hurting to think that he actually wanted her to be dead rather than have left him. More soon I hope! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chelsjo Posted December 29, 2008 Report Share Posted December 29, 2008 I LOVE this fic!!! This fic is very addictive I hope Aden let's Belle see her son soon though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rfran Posted December 29, 2008 Report Share Posted December 29, 2008 I missed a few and just caught up. Fab love the balance of present and flash backs. They were married and they have a son and she left. Wish I could write conversation like you cause the intereaction is great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leah1234 Posted December 29, 2008 Report Share Posted December 29, 2008 wow that was so sad i see why she left now can't wait to see where this is going update soon xxxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KaiyaBlake Posted December 30, 2008 Report Share Posted December 30, 2008 Oh my god. They had a baby!? Aww and she left I hope Aden forgives her, it would be heaps hard but I hope he does... And I hope Belle gets too finally be with jamie. Stupid kirsty... just turn around and close the curtains, no one wants you lol Great Chapters . update sooon pleasee? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted December 30, 2008 Report Share Posted December 30, 2008 Belle hit Annie! Okay, she was going off on one but she didn't deserve that.And then she threatened to hit Melody! She was upset, Irene had just died and given what happened maybe Annie’s words (and definitely Melody’s) were a little out of order... Okay, I was probably being a bit hard on Belle.I often am.But you could say that Annie was upset too and that maybe Belle's words were a little out of order. Liked that chapter, Aden's fury was very believable and understandable and we finally know why Belle left.And the first mention that Nicole's still around, I was beginning to wonder. Reserving judgement on Kirsty until we actually meet her.But Jamie does seem to like her so Belle saying she's more important to him than the woman that raised him seems a bit desperate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted December 30, 2008 Report Share Posted December 30, 2008 Belle hit Annie! Okay, she was going off on one but she didn't deserve that.And then she threatened to hit Melody! She was upset, Irene had just died and given what happened maybe Annie’s words (and definitely Melody’s) were a little out of order... Okay, I was probably being a bit hard on Belle.I often am.But you could say that Annie was upset too and that maybe Belle's words were a little out of order. Hang on, what am I arguing with you for?It's your story! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SAM27# Posted December 30, 2008 Report Share Posted December 30, 2008 WOW....That chapter was just brilliant......Aden's anger, Belle's reason, the pregnancy, Kirsty watching...oh god it is all so good!! Can't wait for more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Louise_2983 Posted December 30, 2008 Report Share Posted December 30, 2008 Belle hit Annie! Okay, she was going off on one but she didn't deserve that.And then she threatened to hit Melody! She was upset, Irene had just died and given what happened maybe Annie’s words (and definitely Melody’s) were a little out of order... Okay, I was probably being a bit hard on Belle.I often am.But you could say that Annie was upset too and that maybe Belle's words were a little out of order. Liked that chapter, Aden's fury was very believable and understandable and we finally know why Belle left.And the first mention that Nicole's still around, I was beginning to wonder. Reserving judgement on Kirsty until we actually meet her.But Jamie does seem to like her so Belle saying she's more important to him than the woman that raised him seems a bit desperate. I mentioned Nicole in Chapter 1, she still lives with Roman. She may be in the next chapter, I'm still toying with whether to include something I've thought up involving her. Thank you for all the nice comments everyone Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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