KittCatt Posted May 8, 2016 Report Share Posted May 8, 2016 Great Chapter! Once again the flashbacks provide some insight into what Kyle has been through and is struggling with now. Glad he is going to tell Phoebe. I liked the idea of the birthday party, pity Kyle hasn't really enjoyed it. The inclusion of other characters such as Zac and Leah is a nice touch. I look forward to more, update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ludub Posted May 8, 2016 Report Share Posted May 8, 2016 7 minutes ago, KittCatt said: Great Chapter! Once again the flashbacks provide some insight into what Kyle has been through and is struggling with now. Glad he is going to tell Phoebe. I liked the idea of the birthday party, pity Kyle hasn't really enjoyed it. The inclusion of other characters such as Zac and Leah is a nice touch. I look forward to more, update soon Thanks KittCatt! I did think it would be nice to have a few more characters in the story. It's been extremely Kyle and Tamara focused the last few chapters. Really appreciate your feedback as always! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted May 8, 2016 Report Share Posted May 8, 2016 Great chapters Awww poor Kyle! Liked the birthday party Glad he is going to open up to Phoebe Looking forwards to the next chapter Xxx 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
InfantryAlex Posted May 8, 2016 Report Share Posted May 8, 2016 I loved this chapter! Awesome that Kyle is feeling like he needs to open up to someone, shame it's not Tamara but hopefully that will come soon. Also, loved, loved, LOVED the Zac and Leah moments. Update soon! 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ludub Posted May 8, 2016 Report Share Posted May 8, 2016 3 minutes ago, BraxandCharlie4Ever said: I loved this chapter! Awesome that Kyle is feeling like he needs to open up to someone, shame it's not Tamara but hopefully that will come soon. Also, loved, loved, LOVED the Zac and Leah moments. Update soon! Thank you! That's very kind of you. Glad you liked the Zac and Leah bits. Thought you might! haha. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted May 9, 2016 Report Share Posted May 9, 2016 Great chapter liked the idea of the birthday party. Glad you added Leah and Zac. its good Kyle is going to tell Phoebe about his past I look forward to more Update again soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Suzza101 Posted May 9, 2016 Report Share Posted May 9, 2016 Awesome chapter poor Kyle, the pain just doesn't stop glad he told Pheobe and he's going to tell Tamara update again soon. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
InfantryAlex Posted May 9, 2016 Report Share Posted May 9, 2016 (edited) Awesome well written chapter! Glad that Kyle has finally decided it is best to tell Tamara what's going on, and hopefully convince him to stand up to these people that hurt Kyle. Please update soon . Edited May 9, 2016 by BraxandCharlie4Ever 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ludub Posted May 10, 2016 Report Share Posted May 10, 2016 (edited) 1 hour ago, Suzza101 said: Awesome chapter poor Kyle, the pain just doesn't stop glad he told Pheobe and he's going to tell Tamara update again soon. 43 minutes ago, BraxandCharlie4Ever said: Awesome well written chapter! Glad that Kyle has finally decided it is best to tell Tamara what's going on, and hopefully convince him to stand up to these people that hurt Kyle. Please update soon . Thanks to both of you for the continued support. It's so lovely to see those little notifications pop up I do really appreciate it. Glad you're enjoying the story so far... Poor Kyle! I don't know why I'm so cruel to him. Especially since he's always been my favourite character on the show. I wonder if any of the cast ever read any of these stories. I kinda hope they don't! Nic Westaway might be wondering what he ever did to get on my wrong side, lol! Edited May 10, 2016 by Ludub 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KittCatt Posted May 10, 2016 Report Share Posted May 10, 2016 Great Chapter! Glad Kyle was honest with Phoebe. But talking hasn't really helped- he is still having quite a rough time at the moment. Telling Tamara what happened then confronting it might be the only way to help. This is all happening at an unfortunate time where he should be enjoying fatherhood Liked the addition of Alf in this chapter. And now Ash is worried Phoebe is sick. I think there are problems ahead for Ash and Phoebe. I like that hearing what happened to Kyle affected her so much- it shows how much she cares for him. I hope Kyle starts to feel better soon, but angst and drama is often much more exciting than just being happy for us readers anyway, not the characters themselves...Brilliant writing once again. You have such a knack for making us feel for the characters as they go through trauma. I look forward to more, update soon 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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