Suzza101 Posted May 6, 2016 Report Share Posted May 6, 2016 Great chapter awwwww the new baby has arrived and I love the name Noah oh no Kyle's past is coming back update soon please 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted May 8, 2016 Report Share Posted May 8, 2016 Great chapter Seems like the people on the news might of abused Kyle. I hope Kyle tells Tamara about his past. I look forward to more Update again soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KittCatt Posted May 8, 2016 Report Share Posted May 8, 2016 Great Chapter! Once again great writing, especially the vivid flashbacks and dreams. You capture Kyle's distress so well. Sad that Kyle is affected by what happened in his past so quickly. Glad he has got Tamara for support but he is adamant he doesn't want her to know. I think it's only going to get worse if he doesn't talk about it. I look forward to more, update soon 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted May 8, 2016 Author Report Share Posted May 8, 2016 Well, Kyle isn't as bad as I thought he might be but it looks like he still has a lot of issues that he needs to deal with, and bottling them up won't help. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
InfantryAlex Posted May 8, 2016 Report Share Posted May 8, 2016 Just read this! Absolutely love it! Interesting take on Kyle's background, looking forward to reading more! Noah! One of my favourite names ever. Can't wait to read more. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ludub Posted May 8, 2016 Report Share Posted May 8, 2016 19 minutes ago, BraxandCharlie4Ever said: Just read this! Absolutely love it! Interesting take on Kyle's background, looking forward to reading more! Noah! One of my favourite names ever. Can't wait to read more. Thank you for reading! Really appreciate the feedback! ? 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Suzza101 Posted May 8, 2016 Report Share Posted May 8, 2016 Great chapter Poor Kyle he's so scared i really think he should tell someone what is going on Please update soon 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Suzza101 Posted May 8, 2016 Report Share Posted May 8, 2016 Great chapter I liked the bit with Zac calling him a young buck Awww poor Kyle i feel more sorry for him each chapter Glad hes going to talk to pheobe Update soon please 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ludub Posted May 8, 2016 Report Share Posted May 8, 2016 14 minutes ago, Suzza101 said: Great chapter I liked the bit with Zac calling him a young buck Awww poor Kyle i feel more sorry for him each chapter Glad hes going to talk to pheobe Update soon please Thanks! Really appreciate the feedback and glad you're enjoying the story so far. Thought I'd try to bring in a bit of light relief with the birthday party so it's not all doom and gloom. I feel terrible for Kyle and it's me that's writing it! lol! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted May 8, 2016 Author Report Share Posted May 8, 2016 Ooh, Kyle did his best with the party but he's obviously not happy.Wonder what he's going to say to Phoebe.Looking forward to more! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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