Red Ranger 1 Posted April 30, 2016 Report Posted April 30, 2016 Good idea and good start.I like the insight into Kyle's past and I get the feeling the news report Ash stumbled across is connected somehow.I like the idea of Kyle and Tamara expecting a baby and how happy Kyle is about it. 1 Quote
KittCatt Posted April 30, 2016 Report Posted April 30, 2016 Glad you are writing another story Great start with a flashback. It's nice that you explored Kyle's background a bit. I suspect that his foster care background is going to come up again. Kyle and Tamara are going to be parents soon and Kyle couldn't be happier. I enjoy Kyle with Tamara as well as Phoebe so I like that Phoebe is there to support both Kyle and Tamara. I do wonder what is going to happen if Ash is right and Phoebe does still have underlying feelings for Kyle. And Kat seems to enjoy spending time with Ash without Phoebe around so.. I wonder what you have in store for Kyle and everyone else throughout this story. I look forward to more 1 Quote
Guest Posted April 30, 2016 Report Posted April 30, 2016 Great chapter Liked the flashback of Kyle's past. I like Tamara and Kyle together and that they are expecting a baby together. I look forward to more Update again soon Quote
Suzza101 Posted May 1, 2016 Report Posted May 1, 2016 Great chapter liked the flashback at Kyle's past. I always loved Kyle and Tamara together I love how Kyle is going to be a dad look forward to more update soon please. 1 Quote
Guest Posted May 2, 2016 Report Posted May 2, 2016 Great chapter liked that you mentioned Phoebe's miscarriage. Liked the flashback I have a feeling maybe Kyle was sexually abused when he was younger. I look forward to more Update again soon Quote
KittCatt Posted May 2, 2016 Report Posted May 2, 2016 Great Chapter once again! Continue to enjoy Phoebe and her friendship with Kyle and Tamara. Like that you brought up Phoebe's miscarriage. Natural that Tamara would want to know more about Kyle's past now that they are having kids. The continuing flashbacks are a great way for us to piece together what he has gone through as a child. Great job Like that even though Josh is blind he is enjoying life and studying at uni. I look forward to more, update soon 1 Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted May 2, 2016 Author Report Posted May 2, 2016 Nice friendship between Phoebe and Tamara, something we didn't really see in the show.Nice reference back to Phoebe's miscarriages too.I continue to be intrigued. 1 Quote
Inactive User Posted May 3, 2016 Report Posted May 3, 2016 Great fanfiction, Ludub! Sorry I haven't been online on the BTTB forum for a while as the wif fi won't let me access the BTTB forum, lol. I had been catching up with the last two chapters and I have to say this is really good! So keep up with the good work. Looking forwards to the next chapter Xxx 1 Quote
Suzza101 Posted May 3, 2016 Report Posted May 3, 2016 Great chapter ohhhh poor 13 year old Kyle. I like Tamaras and Pheobes relationship LOVE Kyle and Tamara together he is sooo cute with the unborn baby ❤️ Update soon please 1 Quote
Guest Posted May 3, 2016 Report Posted May 3, 2016 Great chapter Liking the flashbacks. Its giving us some inset to young Kyle. I look forward to more Update again soon Quote
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