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Good idea and good start.I like the insight into Kyle's past and I get the feeling the news report Ash stumbled across is connected somehow.I like the idea of Kyle and Tamara expecting a baby and how happy Kyle is about it.

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Thanks KittCatt and Red Ranger 1!  I really appreciate the feedback! So glad you both liked it. I thought Kyle deserved to find a bit of peace after everything he's been through so I went with the war

Thanks!  Glad you enjoyed it! I thought it was about time someone told Phoebe what a horrible person she is! lol! I thought the 'Brax isn't even your brother' thing was something that she might a

Thanks everyone for the feedback. I've exceeded my 'likes' again today (oops!) Glad you all liked the Heath scenes. I think Heath has always cared about Kyle deep down, even if he hasn't been com

Glad you are writing another story :)

Great start with a flashback. It's nice that you explored Kyle's background a bit. I suspect that his foster care background is going to come up again.

Kyle and Tamara are going to be parents soon and Kyle couldn't be happier. I enjoy Kyle with Tamara as well as Phoebe so I like that Phoebe is there to support both Kyle and Tamara. I do wonder what is going to happen if Ash is right and Phoebe does still have underlying feelings for Kyle. And Kat seems to enjoy spending time with Ash without Phoebe around so.. 

I wonder what you have in store for Kyle and everyone else throughout this story. I look forward to more :P

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Great chapter 

Liked the flashback of Kyle's past.

I like Tamara and Kyle together and that they are expecting a baby together.

I look forward to more 

Update again soon :)

 

 

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Great chapter

liked that you mentioned Phoebe's miscarriage.

Liked the flashback I have a feeling maybe Kyle was sexually abused when he was younger. 

I look forward to more 

Update again soon :)

 

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Great Chapter once again!

Continue to enjoy Phoebe and her friendship with Kyle and Tamara. Like that you brought up Phoebe's miscarriage. Natural that Tamara would want to know more about Kyle's past now that they are having kids. The continuing flashbacks are a great way for us to piece together what he has gone through as a child. Great job :)

Like that even though Josh is blind he is enjoying life and studying at uni. 

I look forward to more, update soon :P

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Nice friendship between Phoebe and Tamara, something we didn't really see in the show.Nice reference back to Phoebe's miscarriages too.I continue to be intrigued.

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Great fanfiction, Ludub! Sorry I haven't been online on the BTTB forum for a while as the wif fi won't let me access the BTTB forum, lol. I had been catching up with the last two chapters and I have to say this is really good! So keep up with the good work. :) Looking forwards to the next chapter Xxx

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Great chapter 

ohhhh poor 13 year old Kyle. 

I like Tamaras and Pheobes relationship 

LOVE Kyle and Tamara together he is sooo cute with the unborn baby ❤️

Update soon please 

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