Samantha28 Posted September 18, 2011 Report Share Posted September 18, 2011 Epic chapter!!! I wish Grant shot himself, serves him right! I hope Charlie'll be okay, and that she will get lots of support in her recovery. I look forward to more! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted September 18, 2011 Report Share Posted September 18, 2011 Wow, tense chapter, I was on tenterhooks over how long it was taking them to find Charlie.And that gunshot at the end is very worrying.Looking forward to finding out what happened! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JosieTash Posted September 18, 2011 Report Share Posted September 18, 2011 LOVE it !!! Sooooo emotional and gripping, especially ....... “She doesn’t know where she is. And he...” Brax hesitated, not wanting to have to tell Ruby what had happened to her mother, and because he knew that Martha didn’t know the truth about Grant. “He hurt her again, Jack. Then I think he must have come back, because I heard her screaming, and he was laughing, before the phone cut off again”. Both Jack and Ruby instantly understood what he meant, and the anger and pain displayed on their faces showed how they were feeling. “That’s it,” Ruby said angrily. “He is dead.” “Colleen, do you realize that you’ve given a psycho, abusive rapist our address?” Ruby hissed, and both Colleen and Martha looked surprised. “Look,’ Ruby began, and Mr and Mrs Bledcoe stared at her. “I know that even though I’m your granddaughter, that you’ve never had anything to do with me, and that’s fine. And I know that you don’t believe that Grant raped Charlie. But you can’t deny that he has this time. He’s broken the law and he’s going to go to jail. But if he’s done something to my mum, then I don’t have anyone else. My mum is all I have. So, I’m begging you – if you have any idea where Grant is, then please tell me. I can’t lose her,” Ruby finished, and she could feel the tears rolling down her cheeks as she spoke. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mft Posted September 18, 2011 Report Share Posted September 18, 2011 fantastic chapter. Loved how Brax was sensible and went to the police and that he took care of Ruby. Cannot wait for the next chapter! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucii Posted September 18, 2011 Report Share Posted September 18, 2011 Oh Grant better have shot himself otherwise your gonna have a serious army of Charlie fans after you Fantastic Chapter I actually love how Brax and Ruby are so protective of looking out for her....I hope Charlie is okay though Update soon x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dingo x Posted September 18, 2011 Report Share Posted September 18, 2011 Awesome chapter, OMG I wanna know who gets shot! Can't wait for more. xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HighwayUnicorn Posted September 18, 2011 Report Share Posted September 18, 2011 (edited) I loved the emotion and interaction between everyone in that update and I really look forward to more. I'm concerned about the preview though ... hmm ... update soon. Carina xxx Edited September 18, 2011 by -Carina- Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ldscott Posted September 18, 2011 Report Share Posted September 18, 2011 Absolutely fantastic couple of chapters! Was so shocked at Grant's evilness! Hope he shot himself! Please update soon! xxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel90 Posted September 18, 2011 Report Share Posted September 18, 2011 I loved this chapter... Brilliantly written... Have a feeling Jack is shot... Looking forward to more... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted September 20, 2011 Report Share Posted September 20, 2011 I'm thinking Jack was shot. Well exicting chapter I love the high drama in this story Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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