ldscott Posted August 29, 2011 Report Share Posted August 29, 2011 Great chapter, Grant is a nasty piece of work, just hope Ruby realises that straight away! Can't wait to read more! Lisa x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JosieTash Posted August 30, 2011 Report Share Posted August 30, 2011 LOVE this fic, especially …… But it seemed that now Charlie had shared her secret, that she was able to sleep peacefully. Brax just stared at Angelo. “No, she was telling me about Grant,” Brax said angrily. Angelo’s jaw dropped slightly as he heard this; it had taken Charlie ages to tell him about Grant and they were engaged, and yet here Charlie was telling a guy that she hadn’t known for very long already. “Yeah, and she also told me what you did when you found out the truth” “I tried to make myself believe that I could deal with not being with you, but I can’t.” Grant snorted to himself; if she thought being a police officer meant that she was safe from him, then she had another thing coming. Before Grant could react, the man’s fist flew through the air and punched him square in the face, causing Grant to land on his back on the ground. “Just trust me” Brax told her. He knew that Jack wouldn’t help him. But he knew that Angelo was desperate to make it up to Charlie. This was why he knew that Angelo would help Brax deal with Grant. She knew how stressed Charlie was about Grant’s parents being in town, and Ruby wanted to do something nice for her. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Samantha28 Posted August 30, 2011 Report Share Posted August 30, 2011 I'm loving this story! Can't wait to read more! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucii Posted August 30, 2011 Report Share Posted August 30, 2011 BAD GRANT! grrr! I hope he doesn't win Ruby round and the rest of the bay I hope Charlie gets justice! Angelo and Brax teaming up to protect Charlie is just adorable Yaaay Charlie&Brax! Can't wait for more, update soon xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel90 Posted August 30, 2011 Report Share Posted August 30, 2011 I wish Brax would atleast find out about charlie's past Maybe they could get his parents top come and visit.. I mean in the show... Stupid writers ruin everything Great chapter... Arrrr Gran Scary as hell... Im glad am not Charlie.... Colleen keep those ears to yourself... Oh NOOOOOO Poor Ruby.. this doesnt sound good at all... I loved Charlie and Brax so cute... Wish Brax had given him more than just one punch... Damn you Jack Update soon plz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
homeandaway13 Posted August 30, 2011 Report Share Posted August 30, 2011 I have just started reading this and i just wanted to say that i loved all of the chapters and i can't wait to read more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted August 31, 2011 Report Share Posted August 31, 2011 Hope Angelo and Brax don't end up doing something silly to Grant his not worth it Hope Ruby gets away from Grant and doesn't get trapped in the house with him. Look forward to more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chickiboomxx Posted September 5, 2011 Report Share Posted September 5, 2011 (edited) Fantastic chapter! Steve Peacocke(Brax) gave me a high five!!! Seriously the best day of my life!!! Lucky you I'm glad you had a good time. I hope Brax can save Charlie in time. lovely conversation between Ruby and Charlie. Really looking forward to more! Please update soon xx x Edited September 5, 2011 by Chickiboomxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted September 5, 2011 Report Share Posted September 5, 2011 Nice update.Good that Ruby didn't let Grant in and that Jack knows what's going on and is on Charlie's side.But that ending...uh-oh.What's Grant planning to do to Charlie? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted September 5, 2011 Report Share Posted September 5, 2011 (edited) Great chapter Glad Ruby didn't let Grant in and I am glad she didn't doubt Charlie. Loved their conversation and I cracked up at Ruby's squeal that Chax are back together I wished Ruby should have never doubted Charlie (about Grant) on the show-I hated how it drove a wedge between them when Grant turned Ruby against Charlie on the show-it's all his fault for causing tension between them because of what he did Gosh at the ending! Wondering what Grant is going to do to Charlie?? Wonder how Ruby is going to react if she knew it's Colleen who gave Grant their home address...? Looking forwards to the next chapter xx Edited September 5, 2011 by ~JarlieFanEver~ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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