pembie Posted August 4, 2011 Report Share Posted August 4, 2011 (edited) Hey sorry about the late comment Poor Ruby finding out Mark and Jenny are gone. Charile why did you break up with Brax something tells me You will need him. Look Forward to next chapter. Edited August 4, 2011 by pembie Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted August 6, 2011 Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 Thanks for the comment on my fanfiction Great chapter. The funeral service was touching and well-written. Can't wait to see how Casey and Ruby react to Chax's break-up in next chapter. Update soon xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HighwayUnicorn Posted August 6, 2011 Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 That was brilliantly written ... perfect character portrayal & the emotions were written beautifully. I look forward to more & seeing how Ruby & Casey will react to Charlie & Brax breaking up. Well done. Love Carina xxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted August 6, 2011 Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 Well, it's good that Charlie and Ruby are getting on well, shame about the circumstances.Kind of ironic that people are more bothered about Angelo cheating on Charlie than Nicole at best contributing to a fatal accident.Guess that's small towns for you.Looking forward to more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
abbie Posted August 6, 2011 Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 Great update, really like the fact they live together now Looking forward to brax and charlie talking Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elikell Posted August 6, 2011 Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 A beautifully written chapter. Wonderful interaction between Charlie and Ruby. Love that they now live together. Things seem to be moving along nicely with them. Can't wait to see where you take this next. Update soon please. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel90 Posted August 6, 2011 Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 Awww loved this chapter... Ruby and Charlie bonding and being there for eachother... That was really cute... Awww I hope Charlie gets back with brax... Wonder what Casey and Ruby are guna say about Brax and Charlie... Great chapter update soon plz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted August 7, 2011 Report Share Posted August 7, 2011 Liking the Mother/Daughter bond that Charlie and Ruby are beginning to have now its nice they live together now update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JosieTash Posted August 7, 2011 Report Share Posted August 7, 2011 I’ve just read this fic from the start … as it began just before my ordeal ………… LOVE it !!!!! …….especially …… Ruby & Charlie’s 1st meeting judgmental Martha Ruby’s reaction to find out Charlie’s in town Ruby slapping Charlie AND "Because it's true, isn't it mother dear?" she asked Charlie in a sickly-sweet voice. Ruby ... being Ruby ["So you want me to feel sorry you because you were just some stupid slut who got herself pregnant because you were careless?" ….. ] Adoption explanation [when I met Jenny and Mark that they were the couple that I wanted to have you.] While Ruby might have a slight anger-management issue and was quick to judge, she was also a mature yo]ung woman and Charlie was proud to be her mother. Date prep, esp………. They had walked about 10 steps away from the caravan, when they heard Ruby shout "You better not get up to any funny business, I want you home by 12 - you have work tomorrow". “I think that is more of like a 15th date sort of revelation” she told him Ruby’s reaction to the date Car crash, esp. Ruby’s reaction to Nic being the driver Ruby was very disappointed that it was her left that was broken – meaning she still had to write at school "Yes I do. He hurt you, and I don’t care how long ago it was” Charlie took Ruby’s hand. “Yes Ruby, I’m going to move in with you” Charlie replied. Ruby was silent for a moment, before throwing her one good arm around Charlie, whilst jumping up and down and squealing. Charlie couldn’t help but laugh as she hugged her daughter back, and joined in with Ruby’s jumping and squealing. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
callyha Posted August 7, 2011 Report Share Posted August 7, 2011 I'm loving the bond Charlie and Ruby are developing and now they moved in together! Poor Ruby at the funeral Beautifully written, more soon please Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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