teespazzr Posted June 23, 2011 Report Share Posted June 23, 2011 Good start! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chester-Sam Posted June 23, 2011 Report Share Posted June 23, 2011 Oooh I like this story already I look forward to more! - Sam. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HighwayUnicorn Posted June 23, 2011 Report Share Posted June 23, 2011 An excellent first chapter. I loved the way you opened the fic about Charlie running away. A fantastic start & you've captured my attention, well done. Now I look forward to more & seeing where you take this. Love Carina xxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
totally Posted June 23, 2011 Report Share Posted June 23, 2011 Thank you som much, I really like it. Can't wait till she meets Ruby and bumps into Brax. Please update soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elikell Posted June 23, 2011 Report Share Posted June 23, 2011 Ooooh, I do like this fic already! The way you've portrayed Charlie is amazing and very well written. I'm loving it. I especially like the bit about Charlie telling herself that she was going to get asked a lot about new to the bay, because that is exactly what it would be like in a small town (having come from a small town, I do know this for a fact!). So well done on that. Update soon please. I'm very interested to see where you take this and how it all comes together. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucii Posted June 23, 2011 Report Share Posted June 23, 2011 Love it! Cant wait for Brax and Charlie to meet properly and Ruby! Update soon x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lozlovesh&a Posted June 23, 2011 Report Share Posted June 23, 2011 Oh I really like this! Continue please. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LauraPhilly!! Posted June 23, 2011 Report Share Posted June 23, 2011 Good first chapter...looking forward to reading more! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danni02 Posted June 23, 2011 Report Share Posted June 23, 2011 Good start. Looking forward to more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted June 23, 2011 Report Share Posted June 23, 2011 Good start. Hope to read more soon : )x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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