JosieTash Posted September 5, 2011 Report Share Posted September 5, 2011 GRIPPING chapter !!!!! …….LOTS happening there, especially …. “Get the hell away from me!” Ruby yelled. She kicked his foot, making him withdraw his foot from the pain. A moment was all Ruby needed, and she quickly slammed the door shut and locked it. Ruby ran around to all the windows and locked those too, drawing the blinds as she did so. When she was sure that she had got them all, she stepped back shaking. Jack interrupted her, “Go home. I’ll cover your shift for you, and I’ll go word Grant for you as well” he offered. “Wow. Brax really likes you, you know,” Ruby hinted; not knowing that he and Charlie were back together. “That’s not very professional is it? A cop telling an innocent citizen to get out of town. I wonder how that would go down with your superiors,” “Right,” Brax said to Angelo before turning back to a slightly worried looking Grant. “So maybe not two people could make you. But I’m pretty sure that about twenty angry men could,” Brax hinted. Grant swallowed audibly. Holding her firmly in place, Grant pressed the tip of the syringe into her leg and pressed down, until it all had been injected. He then carelessly threw aside the empty syringe, covered Charlie’s mouth again to stop her screaming and held her down. She continued to thrash against his grip, but as time went on, her struggles became weaker and weaker, until her eyes closed and she became still. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Samantha28 Posted September 5, 2011 Report Share Posted September 5, 2011 I hope Charlie's okay! How dare Grant! He'll be put way this time. Brilliant chapter! Looking forward to more! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucii Posted September 5, 2011 Report Share Posted September 5, 2011 Oh noo Charlie Come on Brax come save the day and be her hero! Evil grant I hope they lock him up and throw away the key x Update soon P.S Steve Peacocke hi-fived you...I'm sooo jealous haha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted September 7, 2011 Report Share Posted September 7, 2011 Wow Grant is one creepy guy not liking the sound of his plan. That ending was gripping Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
callyha Posted September 8, 2011 Report Share Posted September 8, 2011 Okay, I've missed some very good chapters here. Chapter 17 I loved how Ruby was trying to get Charlie to spill all the details on her and Brax And Heath teasing BRax, such a Heath -ism! Charlie and Ruby's relationship is so lush Chapter 18 GO Charlie! Loved how Charlie just slapped Angelo, he did deserve it and I just loved reading that lol. And Brax eavesdropping into the conversation -lol Casey's line It's just that you're so hot, and he's so..not made me I do like how they are friends, its nice to read Martha's reaction -just another reason to HATE Martha. I didn't like her in the show, and I don't like her in this! I suppose now she and Charlie have had a cry and hugged now, Martha can be a little more tolarable, but still....Martha is one character I just don't like. I had to laugh at Leah and Bianca's comic relief So close That whole bit made me laugh! Chapter 19 Can't believe the Bledcoe's are in the bay! Poor Charlie, hope their stay is of the short kind. But I have a pretty big feeling that they are going to be torturing poor Charlie with their presence. I loved how Ruby called charlie mum and the reaction Charlie had, I love how you write their relationship I liked how Brax found out the truth, by pure accident and he didn't have to keep asking Charlie to tell him. I think that probably might have helped Charlie tell him everything Chapter 20 Grant is such a malevolent d!ck isn't he? Cocky and just so unpleasant! Well done for writing that so well! I'm SO glad Brax punched him -he deserves that and much more too! Colleen! Will you ever change and actually engage brain before acting??? Me thinks not. Now He has Charlie and Ruby's adress and he's going to make their lives a living hell!! Brax and Angelo working together to get Grant! this has to work! Chapter 21 Glad Ruby was able to hold Grant off from getting into the house by kicking him, and glad she actually listened to Charlie (unlike the show lol) and I loved how she was armed with some spray! The seriousness of the Grant situation to the squeal of excitement Ruby gave Charlie was a great contrast, and just shows their relationship -love it! And I really do not like the sound of the ending! Poor Charlie! Although, I found that, whilst I was reading it, I could see it happen right in front of me. Well done for that writing -Amazing! Update soon! I want to know if Charlie is rescued by Brax Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danni02 Posted September 8, 2011 Report Share Posted September 8, 2011 Great updates! Chapter 20 Yey for Brax shouting at Angelo about what he did to Charlie. Stupid Angelo. Ha Brax punching Grant, awesome. Although probably not the best thing to do, I can see why he’d want to hurt him. And oh….what’s he planning for him and Angelo to do to Grant…could get messy….Oh no, Grant’s found out where they live! Chapter 21 Loved Ruby’s reaction to Charlie and Brax getting back together! Oh my goodness Charlie! Grr Grant, whats’s he doing to her! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dingo x Posted September 9, 2011 Report Share Posted September 9, 2011 Great chapters. Can't wait for your next update!! xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HighwayUnicorn Posted September 10, 2011 Report Share Posted September 10, 2011 Another great chapter. I hope Charlie will be okay ... I look forward to more. Carina xxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted September 13, 2011 Report Share Posted September 13, 2011 Great chapter Whoa can't believe Grant hurt Charlie again!! Grant is such a disgusting and sick bastard! Whoa at the ending! Hope Charlie survives! Ruby needs her mother! I wonder if Ruby is going to find out that Colleen gave Grant the home address.... Update soon prettyyy please xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dingo x Posted September 13, 2011 Report Share Posted September 13, 2011 Great chapter, I HATE Grant!! Can't wait for your next update. xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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