Red Ranger 1 Posted July 15, 2011 Report Posted July 15, 2011 And we're off!I repeat Miranda's dedication to JosieTash and hope he's soon well enough to join in the fun. Great start, liked all the little in jokes:The byplay between Xavier and the droids, Darth Palmer force choking General Heath for a laugh.Guess I'll have to take time out from my busy schedule to try and match you now... Tutorial:To the right of the screen above the post you should see three boxes with several horizontal lines on them.Just highlight the bit you want to centre and click on the box where the lines are in the centre(as opposed to the ones where they're to the left or right). Quote
Perry Posted July 15, 2011 Report Posted July 15, 2011 Thanks for combining my 3 favourite things in the world; Star Wars, Home and Away and PORN! The Imperial General stunned the Princess with his blaster and she slumped into his arms. Later, Xavier helped Dex3PO into an oil bath where he reclined, still talking. Meanwhile young Skywalker got to work on little AprilD2, cleaning the dust from all her orifices. “She says- what? She says she has a special message for you, and if you remove her restraining bolt, she will play it.” Xavier quickly did so. A blonde female figure was beamed out of the droid’s holographic unit in front of them. Quote
Miranda Posted July 15, 2011 Report Posted July 15, 2011 (edited) Thanks lads for tutorials and comments Remember, all innuendoes are entirely intentional! Did you know, SOME people haven't seen Star Wars? :o Edited July 15, 2011 by Miranda Quote
Perry Posted July 15, 2011 Report Posted July 15, 2011 Did you know, SOME people haven't seen Star Wars? :o Quote
Zetti Posted July 15, 2011 Report Posted July 15, 2011 Did you know, SOME people haven't seen Star Wars? Thanks so much for telling the world Normally I would be annoyed but not today Loving the start of this fic and I love the fact that Xavier is the in a lead role! So cool Looking forward to the next part Red Quote
Miranda Posted July 15, 2011 Report Posted July 15, 2011 It wasn't ME who just told the world, was it? Yes its about time Xavier starred, I've written far too many things about Romeo Quote
Zetti Posted July 15, 2011 Report Posted July 15, 2011 It wasn't ME who just told the world, was it? Yes its about time Xavier starred, I've written far too many things about Romeo As I said, I dont mind if they know, I am far too happy today to care and yes I love the fact that Xavier is starring Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted July 15, 2011 Report Posted July 15, 2011 Sorry. I did read this chapter earlier. Very well written! & I enjoyed it. Er. As for Star Wars movies, I saw three & didn't enjoy them .. but watched them because my dad did ... Zetti, you're not missing out on much. Love Carina xxx Quote
pembie Posted July 16, 2011 Report Posted July 16, 2011 Home and away meets Star Wars thats a new one This looks like its going be fun to read I think the characters you have cast in this are prefect for their Star Wars roles Look forward to next chapter Quote
Inactive User Posted July 16, 2011 Report Posted July 16, 2011 Loving this fanfiction. Loved how it's dedicated to JosieTash I hope he will make a fully recovery He would be really pleased with the story you are both doing for him when he comes back soon to read it, Miranda and Red Ranger 1 Yeah I had seen Star Wars Some of it Update soon xx Quote
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