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Thanks for your lovely comments! :)

Here's a sneak peak of the next chapter:

Oh what a dilemma I am in!

I've never really been in this situation before so I don't know how to handle it.

Some have said before me, that's it every woman's dream to be in this situation.

Shows how attractive you are, how much you are admired and thought of by others.

Some women have used this to their advantage.

But this is just a catastrophe.

I can't believe it has to be me! Always me!

Play a different record like!

Tell the man up above to put away my file and take out someone else's.

But of course I haven't said what's going on.

Well it's a long story, so be prepared....

"Aden, I promise I'll be fine," reassured Belle. "This is what I want. You are who I want. I'm sure of that!"

"But what if this Jamie guy starts hitting on you or something," said Aden, unimpressively. "You are like the hottest girl around."

Belle blushed but continued.

"Look it'll be....well not a piece of cake but these things never do."

"I can come with you," said Aden, taking her hands. "I want to come with you."

Belle smiled.

"Sorry babe, but I think I better do this on my own! You go home, you've got loads of study to do anyway!"

Aden sighed.

"Yeah I know," he groaned. "Exams next week. I'm dead!"

"You'll do brilliantly," said Belle, rubbing his arm. "But think about this, after the exams are other, it'll be summer, and we can do whatever we want! Together, as it should be!"

Aden grinned.

"Ok," he said. "Love you!"

Belle smiled, leaned in and kissed you.

"Love you too."

Letting go of his hands, Belle opened the car door and hopped out.

Blowing a kiss as she drove away, she waited until the car was out of sight before turning and walking into the diner.

Seeing Jamie, she quickly took a deep breath and walked over.

"Hey Jamie," she said, coming to stand in front of his table.

Jamie looked bemused, then recognition and shocked lit up his face and then he jumped up.

"Belle!" he said, in disbelief. "Is it really you? Oh my God, you look great!"

"So do you," said Belle, and really he did.

He was less round then last time, he hair was shaped differently. He had lost weight too, Belle could tell as he shirt clung to his newly formed muscles.

Before she could say another word, he caught her in a bear hug.

Overwhelmed, Belle simply patted him on the back.

Pulling away, Jamie grinned at her.

"It's so great to be back!"

And before Belle could stop him, he leaned in and kissed her passionately.

Belle had forgotten how soft his lips were.

How good a kisser he was.

And to her surprise, she felt her arms wrap themselves around his neck, clinging to him tightly.

Let me know what you think!

x x x x x x

Edited by LauraPhilly!!
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Oh no....no comments after the sneak peak...

Hope everyone's still enjoying the fic

^^ Oops! I guess I should have commented! :wink:

I'm loving this fic and I want more....

Tele

xx

Thanks Tele!

Full chapters up now!

My computer went all funny and posted the chapter before I was finished typing!! :wink:

x x x x x

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Oh no....no comments after the sneak peak...

Hope everyone's still enjoying the fic

^^ Oops! I guess I should have commented! :wink:

I'm loving this fic and I want more....

Tele

xx

Thanks Tele!

Full chapters up now!

My computer went all funny and posted the chapter before I was finished typing!! :wink:

x x x x x

I loved it... (Both halves! :wink: ) ...more soon please...

Poor Aden and poor Jamie and poor Belle...

Tele

xx

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