Taniya_K Posted October 5, 2009 Report Posted October 5, 2009 Aw, that ending was sad even though it was coming! Loved the way you introduced everyone. Can't wait to find out more about the ring! Greaet start. Can't wait for more, xoxo Quote
LAURZY! Posted October 5, 2009 Report Posted October 5, 2009 That was so sad! i'm in bits Great start, i'm intrigued to know what happened, especially with the ring Looking forward to more Quote
Georgia Posted October 6, 2009 Report Posted October 6, 2009 That was beautifully written I've been waiting for this for ages, and it was well worth the wait. I'm really intrigued to see who Granddaddy is, and learn all about the ring... am I right in thinking it's the silver one that Aden always wears ? Update soon. Georgia. xx Quote
silly_vanessa Posted October 6, 2009 Report Posted October 6, 2009 great start. it's sounding relly good, can't wait too see where its going. Belle Davies? would like to know how she got that name. I wonder where the quote in chapter 1 came from lol. loved it Quote
hitmanfan Posted October 6, 2009 Report Posted October 6, 2009 (edited) oh intriguing - Belle Davis but still hoping the ring has something to do with Aden Loving this new story, can't wait to see where you go with it Edited October 6, 2009 by hitmanfan Quote
tessalove Posted October 6, 2009 Report Posted October 6, 2009 Really good! Start, so wel written and emotional! Really intrigued to know everything! Update soon! El x Quote
LAURZY! Posted October 6, 2009 Report Posted October 6, 2009 It's good to be back chick! You can call me Laura btw.... I'm crying... again lol i think this is gonna be a tearjerker!! haha Belle Davies?! hmmm..... not Jeffries?! Cant wait to find out more about Belle's life and everything Brill couple chapters chick!!! Quote
LauraPhilly!! Posted October 6, 2009 Report Posted October 6, 2009 (edited) I wonder where the quote in chapter 1 came from lol. It was the last two sentences from Eclipse by Stephanie Meyer! xx Edited October 6, 2009 by Adelle4eva!!! Quote
silly_vanessa Posted October 6, 2009 Report Posted October 6, 2009 are you a twilight fan too as well? was the bit at the start from eclipse too? i think it was but i cant remember. i absolutley love the books. hope you can update soon Quote
LauraPhilly!! Posted October 6, 2009 Report Posted October 6, 2009 yeah the robert frost poem was from the beginning of eclipse too!! yeah I absolutely adore the Twilight books and movies!! Books are better though, however I must admit that the New Moon movie trailers do look pretty fantastic! lol! xx Quote
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