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Aww, that was a lovely chapter. So sweet. Nice to see how Llianna & Robert are getting on & Robbie is going to stay with them! Yay!

Amazingly written, beautifully portrayed emotions & the characterisation is just perfect.

Well done Laura. Another amazing chapter & I look forward to the next one.

Love Carina xxx :wub:

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Awww, thanks for the mention.

That was such a lovely, fitting ending with Llianna giving the diary to Robbie so as he can find out about his dad.

It was wonderful to see everything work out for them beautifully.

Well done & thank you so much for such a fantastic fanfiction you have written.

I have really enjoyed reading this & your writing on this has been beautiful.

Love Carina xxx :wub:

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That was utterly brilliant.I love how you interwoved all the stories, showing Robbie back with Illiana in the present and Belle moving forward with Alan in the past and then bringing the whole thing full circle by having Illiana give Robbie the diary that started everything off.Perfect ending!

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