xknomex Posted April 17, 2009 Report Share Posted April 17, 2009 eeeeeeek that beginning was sooo *squeal* Loved how you had Belle telling them like that it was brilliant!!!!! I do have one problem with this fic.....its making me angry at the writers for not doing it like this!!! its so BRILLIANT! LOVED it, cant wait for the next chapter!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Zoe~ Posted April 17, 2009 Report Share Posted April 17, 2009 I liked that chapter Jen, it was great! I liked the fluff Another fight between Geoff and Aden... that was funny.. I love the fact that Aden has changed in the show since the abuse storyline.. but I allways love a good Geoff and Aden showdown Brilliant update! x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gillyh Posted April 17, 2009 Report Share Posted April 17, 2009 P.s. If i find the time, i might try and write a different version of this where Aden and Belle get caught. I wouldn't mind reading that. If you do the other version, you could try my suggestion and bring in Cassie and let her be the one who catches them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zifiso Posted April 17, 2009 Report Share Posted April 17, 2009 That was great, really enjoyed the chapter And, by all means, write the other version, only if you get the time, no pressure, would definitely read it. Update soon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted April 17, 2009 Report Share Posted April 17, 2009 That was a good chapter.I really wanted to see more of their reaction and Belle having to explain the way she felt to them.Loved Geoff getting all protective and thinking Aden was up to something.Looking forward to what you do next. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lise Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 Nice couple of updates. I always seem to miss them. I like the chat Mattie and Belle had in the previous chapter. It was really good. A different version of them being sprung would be good but only if you've got time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
adellejefferiesxox Posted April 19, 2009 Report Share Posted April 19, 2009 God I love these chapters! You write so in character I can actually picture it happening in my head. Please, Please keeep writing!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jody Posted April 19, 2009 Report Share Posted April 19, 2009 Another great chapter. I liked how you did this. The way it was all handled on the show was very dissappointing. I liked how Irene was supportive yet still a bit wary of him at the same time. It's good that while she still cares about Belle getting hurt she is willing to let her make her own decisions. Geoff and Annie's reaction was good to read as well. From their past with Aden it's not surprising that they would have a hard time actually believing he is being genuine and that Belle isn't making a huge mistake by being with him. But I loved Belle at the same time not letting Geoff get away with his comments. Because like she said on the show, she's old enough to make her own decisions. Enjoyed that whole scene. The Belle and Aden scenes were lovely. I especially liked that small moment with the 'amazing' compliment from Aden and Belle trying to shrug it off. Don't know why it just made me smile. There was some nice banter as well between them. And Aden being a bit unsure and nervous at times, I'm really liking seeing that side of him from time to time. I find it sweet. Please update soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dezz Posted May 1, 2009 Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 Love the update! I love the way your writing this fic . The Adelle fluff is great, especially since we don't see much of it on the show anymore... I also like the more serious stuff, I think it'd be cool to see more of the angsty side of Adelle explored in (possible?) future updates... Please update soon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Georgia Posted May 1, 2009 Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 i really love your story and you of course for being an amazing writer. keep going. there is more scenes to write about Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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