Tasha Posted June 15, 2007 Report Share Posted June 15, 2007 Nice work Cindy If Cam lays a finger on Martha i will kill him. Roo and Peter so cute Great chapter More please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vale4eva Posted June 15, 2007 Report Share Posted June 15, 2007 How old is Roo? I was picturing some 50 year old woman oops Great chapter, but im slighty concerned for Marthas welfare now Update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
puja Posted June 15, 2007 Report Share Posted June 15, 2007 Cindy actually shot him?! I can't believe it. Hmm, Cam's seriously dodgy; I'm worried for Martha too! No Jack in that chapter Roo and Peter friends; thats cool. More soon please! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted June 15, 2007 Report Share Posted June 15, 2007 Good on you Cindy. Love the Roo/Peter banter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dolly-999 Posted June 17, 2007 Report Share Posted June 17, 2007 How old is Roo? I was picturing some 50 year old woman oops lol, well she was fifteen when she had Martha, so she's around, 34, 35 ish. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dolly-999 Posted June 19, 2007 Report Share Posted June 19, 2007 Sorry this ones really short, only a page long, but I didn't want to mix it with anything else in the story even though nothing major is revealled. Sorry it's just Cindy in this chapter. Warning: May contain voilence and/or death (V/D). Chapter number 23.Drastic measures Cindy stood still, her arms still outstretched with the gun still aimed where she'd shot, she'd done it, her baby was going to be safe. Moving her arms down and resting her shoulders to relax she stepped forward and stopped when she reached the side of Greg's lifeless body limb and still where it lay on cold floor; he was definitely dead, but just to be sure she shot at him once more slightly higher than the first bullet wound and closer to his heart. The quick moving object peirced his skin so fast that she hardly saw it, blood seeping out of the newly formed hole. Sure that she'd done the job properly, Cindy looked around the room as she placed the gun on a small table that was near by. There wasn't much in the room, a two seater lounge chair that was as ancient as Hitler, a chest of draws against a far wall a chair at the table and a large stone fire place facing the couch that was about two and a half meters wide and a meter and a half tall with a pile of wood next to it. Then she came up with an idea. She'd origanaly thought she'd just6 come and shoot then leave, but now everything was falling into place more perfectly then she'd thought. Working quickly she grab held of some of the logs from the top of the pile of wood, moving them as fast as possible to form a heap in the middle of the fire place. She moved to the chest of draws, going through the draws one by one looking under ever old file and book she could till she came across a small box of matches. Lighting onequickly she through it onto the logs along with two more to start a small fire putting more wood on it to feed it and make it grow. Then steppiong back over to Greg she grabed him by the arms, draging his body along the floor until he was lying in front of the fire place, crouching down on the other side of him she rolled his boddy into the fire, his clothes beginning to light as she stepped away and brushed her hands together swiftly before moving backwards and sitting anxiously on the couch, leaning back into it and watching the fire place as more and more of Gregs body caucht alight. Stairing aimlessly and lossing herself in the flames she stayd there for what seemed, and probbably was hours until the fire dyed out and all that was left was black coated bones. Waking herself up propperly Cindy collected the gun and mode her way out of the flat walking away just the way she had come earlier. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vale4eva Posted June 19, 2007 Report Share Posted June 19, 2007 Cindy's scareing me now But I keep telling myself that she did it for the protection and safety of her child, but still, she didnt have to go and kill someone Anyways, great chapter, more please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted June 19, 2007 Report Share Posted June 19, 2007 That was disturbing. How could someone do that -shudders- Cindy is evil, if she goes anywhere near my Martha, i will kill her Great chapter though More please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted June 22, 2007 Report Share Posted June 22, 2007 Martha stay away from Cindy More please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dolly-999 Posted July 9, 2007 Report Share Posted July 9, 2007 Sorry there hasn't been any updates for a while, I'm working on the next chapter, it should be up later tonight. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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