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I went out last night and got really drunk so couldn't read the update, but then i woke up at 4.00am and couldn't get back to sleep so i came on here. I'm glad you left me this little present cos it meant waking up in the middle of the night was worth it! lol Great chapter! I really loved the Aden/Belle scene at the beginning, it was so cute, and i'm really glad you kept Irene in it. The Drew/Belle scene was good and i think you kept Drew's opinions about Aden in the right way, i'm glad he still doesn't like Aden as it might make good future plot lines...??? Aden/Drew scene was good, i liked that there was no physical fighting but you could tell there was tension, and i liked Drew's thoughts at the end. Overall excellent update as always!!! Update soon!

Excdellent update! sorry im too drunk for a full on review... but i know that it was awesome! lol Update soon!

Belle never got pregnant or had a baby in this story, lol. Edit: sorry did you mean the other Belle? She and her baby died. They got hit by a car.

HOW COULD YOU BE THAT EVIL!!?!?!?!?!?!????? THAT WAS JUST MEAN!!!!!!! Right NOW, you have to update NOW!!! (even though i know you don't usually update at this time, but if by some miracle you are able to, then please please please do! That was a great chapter anyway, i loved Aden's response to the scene and how Irene was with him. You once again got the reactions of all of the characters absolutely perfect!!!!!! I really want to see this Aden/Belle interaction!!!!! Pretty pretty please!!!!?????

Okay, so i was reading monkeysmoke's story and saw your comment (btw i think we should team up on bullying/flattering for stories) and so i come and look at your update here... only to cry! I could see Belle's actions completely happening after Aden said he doesn't think he deserves her, and that is when i started tearing up and then a few paragraphs later a solitary tear actually rolled down my face! it was so sad, sweet, endearing, wonderful, amazing, brilliant, fantastic etc. I've teared up at stories before but the way this tear fell was so different to any before it whilst reading a fic! (i know that's kind of weird but i think it's the best way to describe how you made me feel) Anway, please update REALLY soon!!! i love the fighting and the fluff!

I'm so annoyed at myself for not checking sooner but i was writing up notes from lectures! The reason i'm annoyed is because it means i have less time to hassle you about another update! I'll give it my best try anyway, just in case you have time (which of course you will make even if you don't!)! I loved Nicole, you write her so realistically, and i bet she's gonna be a bit more invasive than Aden might like, i like that even though Aden wasn't in this chapter, it was basically about him, especially about Belle thinking about him! Now that's good! So next chapter: Aden walks Annie home? Belle/Aden interaction?????? up NOW?????

Okay, so i thought your writing was at it's best before but you just sky rocketed in this chapter! That was seriously wow! I was close to tears at the end!!! I know this is really weird but i wasn't feeling too great today and i went and stood in a cupboard, (that's really not as strange as it sounds... my flat mates and i were messing around in it yesterday but the way you described that bit it just made me think that that could have been the reason behind it, so i guess... thanks! (I'm not crazy i swear!) This bit was my favourite bit, im in awe of how you captured both the character's emotions so well and i love that there was no dialogue between them for them both to understand. Absolutely beautiful! Update soon! Please (Aden again maybe?? Or if you want to write Miles/Kirsty or the other characters maybe you could have Aden in the same scene??? lol, ...whatever happens in your next chapter, i can't wait!) I just read this review back and realised a couple of things: 1. I'm a complete nutcase, i swear i do know it is really weird and strange to go and stand randomly in a cupboard. and 2. I am completely obsessed with Aden (probably in this fic even more so than i am in the actual show... credit to your writing i guess!) ;)

WOW, that was good!!!!! My favourite line: The ending was written so perfectly i could see it playing out in my head exactly the way you wrote it! And belle's outburst at the hospital! So sweet and true!!! The beginning with Belle talking to Geoff, i loved! Did they actually finish the assignment cos i'd actually like to see more of that? I liked Nicole talking to Belle in the diner too! Overall, an absolutely brilliant, fantastic, amazing chapter! Update soon!!!

I love it when you write fights!!! you make them seem so realistic!!!! Excellent chapter!! i could see where they were both coming from and i loved that little bit at the end about Aden, that was nearly heartbreaking. I hope Belle sees through his pushing her away. update soon!

THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!! You realise now you've done that once, i will be using it every night?? lol. No seriously, that was an awesome chapter! I loved how Annie was more trusting of Aden than Geoff and how calm Aden was to Geoff in comparison to what he usually is. Even though the characters are behaving quite differently to what i would have imagined at this stage in the show, you've developed them so well from the beginning of your fic that their behaviour is a perfect reflection of the situations they are finding themselves in. I liked how Belle was pleased to see it was Aden, Annie was with. Aden/Belle interaction in the next chapter perhaps? Update again soon? tomorrow... tonight... now???????? sorry to nag but it's your own fault for being so good! seriously though, just update when you have time... and if that happens to be now, then so be it... (sorry i really can't stop myself!)

Aden and Oliver friends?? that should be interesting! i loved the fact that Aden was the one acting more mature in that fight! i can't wait for the next update! Please make it soon!!!

That was great! Played out like a real scene! Can you just clear something up for me though, has Sally left the bay in this fic? I assume she has but i just wanted to make sure... BTW, if you don't start putting Aden into EVERY SINGLE chapter, i am going to stop reading this story!! (THAT WAS A JOKE! I WOULD NEVER EVER DO THAT!!! EVERY BIT OF IT IS TOO DARN GOOD TO NOT READ!!!!!!) But since you can probably tell i'm an Aden fan, any chance of another update tonight (with Aden)????? No pressure, i just seriously love your story!! And i've had a pretty bad day so maybe you could cheer me up?!?!?!?

Aw, that was really sweet! i love Nicole in this fic!! She completely spoke the truth! ...and what's this hidden meaning behind her words??? Great update! More soon, pretty please!!!

I did not see that coming! I'm kind of not liking Aden in this fic anymore but i'm putting it down to the fact that he was young and stupid... Poor Belle, that's really horrible! Update soon!

Loved the fluff!!! It was so sweet!! I really liked what Aden sad at the end to Drew cos i think if anything would make Drew believe Aden had changed then that would be it! And with Belle telling Aden off i guess now Drew can see that Aden's not manipulating her in some way and she's still in charge of making her own decisions. Really fantastic chapter! update soon! Please!

That was really good! Lovin the way you've portrayed Nicole! Especially the way she was being with Aden! Great job! Please update soon!! please please please!!!!!

I'm really busy with uni stuff at the moment but i don't have any lectures tomorrow so i'll see if i can squeeze one in then. Thanks for liking my fic enough to ask! lol

I have tears in my eyes, that was so beautiful! excellent writing!!!

That was fantastic! I've definitely enjoyed reading it! I like that it was his brother's who finally helped him come to terms with everything. The last words were really fitting to the story as a whole!!! Great story and i really hope you write another one soon!!!

Answers! Answers! Answers! I need them, please please update soon!!!! Great chapter, that was so sad with Aden talking to his Dad!!! I'm loving the whole thing!

I loved it!! Aden comforting Belle was really sweet! Threatening Aden at the end was scary! Please don't make him keep secrets from Belle! I liked that he was defending her though! Update soon! Pretty please!

Great update! (even if it was Aden-less ) only joking... well... as much as one can joke about an Aden-less life. Anway, can't wait for the next update!!! (All your updates are fantastic, not just the Aden ones! Just so you know!)

Thanks for updating! i didn't go out in the end, but thanks for thinking of me! lol that was another amazing update! Where's Annie gone? I'd really like to see another scene wtih Annie and Aden and i like that Belle thought Annie might open up to Aden too. Loved the dressing gown joke, it was just enough hint at humour for the reality of the situation! Any chance of another update tonight?? (I am seriously addicted to this fic, I actually prefer it to what happened in the show! ...and since there was no Aden in today's ep of real haa then maybe you could take pity on me??)

I'm going out in an hour... any chance it'll be updated before that??? No pressure lol, i'll just have to read it when i get back otherwise, Anyway, i'm looking forward to it!!!

Aw!!! That was so sweet! I loved how Aden could tell she'd been crying and the way he kept her warm!!! It was so AWWWWWWWW!!!!!!! The bit in the bathroom, I hope when TV week called it a 'steamy reunion' they meant Belle and Aden make love in the bathroom and the steam is from the shower! Would be hot! lol. It really was very cute! I can't wait for another update!!! When the other 'for now' bits are done i hope we get a lot more of this kind of fluff! Or even in between those bits, whatever they may be!