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All i can say is... AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was all so sweet and wonderful and perfect! I loved their teasing and playfulness! That anklet was sweet aswell! Everything about this was just amazing! You are making me so jealous of Belle! lol btw, hope you know i meant i wanted more of the racy fluff not of the promoting... lol, but thank you loads anyway! It was really sweet! You didn't have to do that! Anyway., please update soon!!! I can't wait for more!

Loved the racy fluff section! very well written and exciting! I admit to the cheesy grin also! I love the way you make Aden and Belle wake up in those positions with Aden being protective of her stomach. That talk after they slept together was sooooo sweet! I want an Aden, or at least the Aden in this fic! Because he is amazing! I can't even count the amount of times i awwed! Of course i don't mind you using the term 'racy fluff' but i liked that you used my name cos it's kind of like your promoting my fic, lol. so thanks! (Although you don't have to do that everytime... (HINT: I want more of it hence the 'next'! lol) Can't wait to find out where they're going! Please update soon!

Brilliant, once again! I loved how Aden immediately knew something was wrong as soon as he knew Belle was alone. And i'm really glad Belle has agreed to get treatment. Update soon!

I can't wait to read more of this! It sounds great so far! Aden's really sweet and supportive and i liked Belle's reactions in that chapter! More soon please!!!

Those were some of the most powerfully written chapters i've ever read on fanfic!!! I can't believe what happened to Belle, it was terrible! I'm glad she opened up to Aden. Aden is perfect! I love the way you're writing his character, it's flowing really well! Please update soon! I love it!

I think that was my FAVOURITE chapter! So beautifully written! Light when it needed to be light, tension when there needed to be tension, passion when there needed to be passion and then... Nicole had to go and ruin it all!!!! (although i did love that bit and it was ironic!) I loved Irene's comments at the end, so true! My fave bit was when Aden was telling Belle how he was feeling and that he went and sat in her room... i really liked that idea! I keep thinking of things to say were my favourite bit but it was all so brilliant, i'd be going on forever! Please update soon! I love this fic!

Sorry i haven't commented before now, i've been out of the loop a bit writing my essay. I just want to say that the wedding was the most beautiful thing you have ever written. It was perfect!!! Especially the part where Belle took her shoes off, and i like that Aden didn't wear a tie. The reception was amazing as well, you captured each aspect of it perfectly! Loved the bouquet and garter bits! And i loved how everyone else found out about the baby!!! An amazing couple of chapters, everything played out so naturally in my head (as it always does)! And i can't wait for more!!!!! Update soon!!!

Loved the counselling session! Everything made a lot of sense, Aden at the end was good too, showed his maturity! Update soon!

WOW! I think this was your best chapter yet! They way Belle explained everything to Aden was written amazingly and you really made me feel for her! I'm hoping this Aden/Nicole sleeping together thing is just to get it out of the way so Aden can realise his true feelings for Belle? lol Fantastic yet again! Please update soon!

I am soooooooo excited about the next chapter!!!!!!!! Great as always, LOVED the letter! and the phone call, that was so sweet!!!!!!!! I really can't wait for the next update!!!! SOON!!!!!!!!

Excellent chapter as always!!! the suspense is killing me! I can't wait for the wedding!!! Update soon! PLEASE!!!!!!!

Great chapter! I'm really glad Belle is talking to Aden! Update soon!

Wow, this fic is amazing! I loved the issues you are dealing with, my best friend went through a similar thing to Belle, but fortunately she got help before it went as far, but i know it was still a continuous battle for her and it's very admirable of you to be able to tell people of your experiences and use it as inspiration for the fic. I really like Aden's character, can't wait for more of him and the Aden/Belle scene. Can't wait for more! Please update soon!

OMG! LMAO! That was hilarious! LOVED drunk Belle!!!!!! I liked how you tied in the current plots on HAA with the whole bridget thing! I can't even pick out a favourite part because it was awesome! Although i did particularly like when she threw herself at Aden! I liked the way you ended it too, the abruptness and awkwardness of the situation really came through!!!! Can't wait for another update! Please make it soon!!!!!!!

I loved the talk between Larry and Aden! ...and that conversation between Aden and Rachel was perfect! I'm glad that Aden knows he needs help... i loved what you said about Rachel not being able to stand being next to someone in pain and not being able to help them... and I hadn't even thought about the possibility of him 'silencing' her if he had killed his dad either, but it's completely logical. That last last about Aden not wanting to be the kind of person that belongs in prison was amazing too! I love this fic! Can't wait for more!

Aw! I loved that Belle had to wear Aden's belt and when she referred to him as daddy to the baby i literally did aol! It was so cute!!! I think Belle's resistant on packing because it's been the first place she's ever felt is actually home and she's probably not sure if she's ready to leave yet, just an observation... lol Aden being protective of Belle and the baby, yet again aol! And her speech to him at the end was so good!!!!!!! Loved all the fluff! Keep it coming!!! Althogh i found a part of that last bit a little ominous... better not be foreshadowing from you... the line, 'as long as you come back to me,' makes me think you might do something to Aden so that he can't come back (well at least for a bit, lol)... Hmm... I'm speculating, hehe... Update soon! I can't wait!

Hey, sorry i haven't commented on the last few chapters, my home computer is so slow!!!! They've all been fantastic as per usual! loving the fluff as always!!! I loved Mattie taking Belle lingerie shopping and i can't wait to see Aden's reaction to the dress!!!! can't wait for more! Update soon!!!!!!!

Wow! Amazing chapter yet again! can't wait for more! Please update soon!

I'm ashamed to admit that i steered clear of this fic to start with, because i've read some of your posts elsewhere and disagreed, not completely, because what you've been saying is pretty true most of the time, but i thought that i probably wouldn't like your fic. (Nothing personal!) But then i decided that your posts were so eloquently written that there was the chance you were a pretty good writer, (and good writing can sometimes make even dull plots good)... and boy was i right! (this story isn't dull either, just to clarify, lol.) I really like this! i feel like you've kept the characters in character better than the show has at the moment! You write the prison and the visiting scenes so well, I"m especially liking Nicole/Aden scenes! I can really see what your trying to convey playing out in my head, completely in line with the attitudes and personality of the characters. That last chapter was magnificent! I can't wait to see where you're going to take this. As an adelle fan I'm surprised to hear myself say this but i'm not too bothered about you breaking Belle and Aden up, the story based around Aden in prison just makes the whole fic really good! I love it! Please update soon!!!

This fic makes so much more sense than the show! I loved Belle's reasonings for going away and how she had felt responsible for Aden, especially the bit about the kidnapping and her being more worried about him than herself! I think her going away was really good for Aden too, i think it will be good for both of them to see what they really want. I'm interested to see what Belle will do with Nicole's request and am also loving Nicole at the moment. I love her being protective of Aden and her reasons why, i like that she's trying to be friendly with Belle as well, it seems like she's grown whilst Belle's been away, although it's funny how you compare her to Colleen! I'm glad you wrote the scenes the way round you did with the flashback, i feel it made it much easier to read, excellent use of the device! I also loved Aden, his reactions were so good and Belle's feeling when she was talking to him, i just really never know what you're going to do next! Whatever happens in the fic; it's amazing! Excellent chapter! i really loved it and i can't wait for another update! Please more soon!!!!!!!

That was great! I loved the Amanda/Belle scene, i'm so glad she's giving them her house! I'm a bit worried about what Aden's gonna say though! Update soon!

Aw, that was so sad, i completely understand Belle's reasoning now though... Great chapter, Update soon, can't wait!

Hehe, that made me chuckle! Loved the bit with Annie at the start, Belle's already getting that motherly streak in her! ...i think Nicole must have an alterior motive as well, and them play fighting was so cute! Update soon, i LOVE the fluff but i'm excited to see what's coming!!!! P.s. I think that's rather mean of you, so i'm going to track you down and take him from you (I could do it you know, i'm learning all about detective work at uni!)... by force if i have to... he'll grow to love me... no wait, as soon as he sees me he'll know i'm the one! See, you could have shared but no... now you'll have to cope with nothing!!!

Great chapter! I loved the opening scene, you described it so well! It was really sad that he wasn't with Belle for the first time in days! I think it might be H&A_diehard's theory but my theory is that Plus, she's probably feeling guilty anyway... Love this fic! Please update soon!!!!

I loved the 'intimate' fluff!!! You write it sooooooo well!!!!!! It's so sweet to read! I like how Aden was about the diary at the end, very honourable! And Roman's going to be his best man! YAY! Update soon!!!!!!! P.s. I hear from the grapevine that you've got Todd in the UK... any chance i could borrow him for a night??? lol