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wrongturntaken

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  1. LOVED those last few chapter! You write their relationship so well, even when it's going bad for one of them, it's good when they're together! Update soon! Can't wait!
  2. at that last scene! Excellent chapter, i loved all those character's responses to Tam being back. It was great! Update soon!
  3. Excellent update! This Grant guy is creepy!! Aden needs to put hin in his place! The Aden and Meg scenes are just and that text message, AOL!!!! Loved it!!! Update soon!
  4. Lovin the sound of it so far! Update soon!
  5. Aw! I love all the fluff! It's so cute!!!!!!!!! Especially the texts at the start! Interesting twist with the Grant character though... hope he doesn't hurt her! Can't wait for another update!
  6. That was great! Loved all the stuff with Aden and Belle *swoon* the interruptions were funny to begin with but now i'm worried about Geoff and Nicole! That was a really nice chapter, i love how you showed them shopping together, it was super sweet! update soon!!!
  7. Aw! That was great! Loved the HOT stuff!!!! The stuff with their families was great, i loved it! Trust Geoff to come at a time like that! I loved that line when Aden said that home was with her, it was just Loved every second! can't wait for more! Update soon!
  8. LOVED that chapter! The heat between Aden and Belle was so steamy, i just I loved it when he kept kissing her neck even though Geoff was talking to her, can't wait for them to move in together! Poor Geoff, loved Aden's little bits with him and then his chat with Belle. I love how you brought up the kidnapping in the middle of it and showed Belle's surprise, it worked really well! Can't wait for more! Update soon!
  9. LOVED IT! Once again! I love how worried about Meg, Aden was! It was so sweet and how he figured out where they'd be! The scene with Roman and Jai was fantastic! Absolutely brilliant writing! Update soon! Can't wait!
  10. WOW! THAT WAS AMAZING ONCE AGAIN!!!!!!!!!! I LOVED EVERY SECOND OF IT! THE SCENE WITH AMANDA AND BELLE AND THEM TALKING ABOUT THE NAMES! JUST THE IDEA OF THE SCAN MAKES ME SO SAD TO KNOW ADEN WASN'T THERE! I LOVED THE WAY SHE WAS TALKING TO HIM. I know how hard it is to talk to someone when they're on a ventilator and to try and keep talking without breaking down in front of them even though they can't tell... so i can really sympathise with Belle here. THE REST OF IT WAS BRILLIANT AS WELL! I LOVED THAT JUSTIN AND BELLE HAD THAT TALK, IT WAS PERFECT! AND THEN I'M GLAD DREW WAS THE ONE SHE FINALLY BROKE DOWN WITH, IT WAS SO BRILLIANT THE WAY YOU DID THAT! LOVED EVERY SECOND OF IT!!!!!!!! (AS YOU CAN TELL WITH THE CAPITALS PROBABLY!) UPDATE SOON! CAN'T WAIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
  11. AW! Aden... yet again so cute!!!!! Brilliant chapter! I loved that Aden was the only one to calm her down but he knew why. He was great at comforting Belle too. I loved Irene's and Roman's reaction to their news, it was great! And Nicole's nosiness too! Update soon!
  12. WOW! Taniya that was amazing! You actually made me cry! and i mean, tears running down my cheeks kind of thing! Everything Belle said to Aden was just so so so sooooo sad. And perfect at the same time... I loved the way Justin was the one to tell her everything and the way he did it was great. The way you included Justin in certain bits really made me feel for his character! I absolutely loved the chapter! Hope you can update soon!!!!
  13. LOVED these last two chapters!!!!! Talk about making me fall in love with Aden... you do it over and over and over... it's just so cute!!!!!! He's really adorable with the baby (and Belle). Think you've handled Annie's and Jai's reactions brilliantly! I really love what you're doing in this fic and i think it works really well! Can't wait for another update!
  14. AW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That talk between Aden and Belle was just so so so so so so good!!!!! Absolutely perfect! Belle teasing him and then i loved his answer! That was seriously sweet! Loved Jai's and Mile's reaction! You did that great!!! I have this feeling its not Jai's though... Update soon! Can't wait!!!!
  15. wow! That was amazing! And so sad! That line really hit me, it was so meaningful. Loved it as i love all your writing!
  16. I loved it! Just like all the others!!! I think you handled Irene's reaction perfectly! ...and Geoff's! I could just see him ignoring her and walking up the stairs like that. Rachel and Tony were great too! Can't wait to see what Miles and Jai say! I was kind of wishing you'd have let Belle and Aden take the baby home with them though... Update soon! Can't wait!
  17. That was THE perfect ending! The baptism was lovely and sweet. I'm really glad Gaz got there and i liked how you had him and Ric interrupt, it added a bit of comedy which was a nice touch in the final chapter. Belle and Gaz's talk was great too. I feel like you dealt with all the themes of this fic really well and i love how you managed to change the character's relationships to each other and make it work in what seemed like the right time. I really do like all your fics, you're a great writer! Hope you write another soon!
  18. That was awesome!!!! Aden with the baby... you are so right! I just melted! It was so funny too! Geoff's reaction was hilarious! Irene on the phone was perfect! Everything about it was fantastic! Can't wait for another update! Soon please!
  19. I think you wrote that absolutely fantastically! You captured the emotions of all the characters perfectly!!!! I loved Rachel on the phone! And Aden's nervousness and he was so sweet at the end when he was holding the baby! Seriously can't wait for more! This is so good so far! Update soon!
  20. That was absolutely fantastic!!! And so sad!!!! I loved how you've told us he's got really serious injuries but the way you're keeping it from Belle still is really clever even though she knows what their silence means really. I loved that scene between her and Roman, and her holding onto Aden's things like the rings was so sad as well! I liked her pondering the ring, it really gives you the sense of her wanting to ask him so he needs to come through! I can't wait for the next update! You are making me feel so much for all of the characters!!!! I love it! Please update soon!!!
  21. That was great! I loved the start with Aden and Ruby! Aden's reaction to the baby was great too! I love the realtionship Belle and Aden seem to have now. It was nice she took her daughter to see Larry and i'm glad Geoff went with her. He said exactly the right things. Update soon!
  22. Woah! I did not see that coming! I loved Aden and Belle's reactions in that scene! It was awesome! I can't believe Annie's pregnant! Update soon! Can't wait!
  23. AWWWWW!!!!!!!!! I love it!!!! I have a huge grin now!!!! That was so perfect, i loved every moment of it, especially how he used the word 'roomie'! And their banter was absolutely perfect and excellently written! Intriguing at the end, i think he might have seen a mad Nicole but i guess i'll just have to wait and see... Update soon! Can't wait!!!
  24. Loved this chapter! The Aden/Ruby scene was so sweet! Ruby getting rid of Melody was very funny! I loved her and Annie's talk! Geoff and Nicole's talk was sweet too! I'm glad they're moving forward. Update soon!
  25. WOW!!!! WOW!!!! WOW!!!!!!!! WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I think that proposal has to be the best one out of all that i've seen on TV or film, or read in a book!!!! It was soooo good!!!!!!! Aden did it perfectly, everything he said was just so sweet!!!!!! I loved that you had Belle interrupting him all the time, it showed how comfortable they were with each other. And it was nice that she didn't figure it out until he actually did it. I absolutely LOVE LOVE LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But you have to make Aden alright!!!!! What has happened to him????? Please don't leave us in suspense!!!!! Why is no one else telling Belle what's happened????? Update soon!!!! I'm literally bursting to find out!!!!!!!!!
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