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OMG! I can't believe you actually did that! It makes for a great story though! It was excellently written with Larry telling him! I liked the way Amanda spoke to Belle at the start! Update soon!

That has to be my most favourite chapter ever! There are no words to describe how good this chapter was because, fantastic, amazing, incredible, awesome... they just don't cut it! It was so beautiful... beautiful content and beautifully written. The bit about Aden's mum was just the sweetest thing ever, especially about the stars. You really showed what Aden was feeling and why he was so confused about Justin being back! Belle was so good at comfoting him, she said just the right things. I loved the ending, it was so symbolic and i loved that Aden couldn't sleep without her there! I just AOL at that!!! Seriously Tan, this was one of your best ever! (which is hard to define considering how good all your chapters are!) I can't wait for another update and i really hope Aden talks to Justin! You're awesome!!!! P.s. The court date has been postponed due to the fact that Todd saw the way you write and said he had to think over his feelings for me because there was something to you after all... (I think this comment shows you just how great i think your writing is!)

I'm am SO intrigued!!!! I really hope its not the brother/sister thing either... Can't wait for an update! That was excellently written!

LOVED the bit about Leah! lmao at that! I'm still loving this, it's hilarious every chapter! lol at Aden/Belle, Nicole/Geoff trying to kill each other off. I loved Annie's reactions! So funny! Can't wait for another update!

It was AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Seriously that talk between Justin and Aden was so so so SO PERFECT!!!!!!!!! That last line, i could just about see it coming that he wanted that but you paced it so well. I loved the start with Aden and Belle! You just portray the way their feeling so well in how you write! Can't wait for the next update!!! Oh, P.s. Taniya, I have the court date...

wow, this was so beautiful and powerful. I loved the poem... was so sad. I hope you write more, you're really good!

I was thinking the brother and sister thing too... you wouldn't would you? It would be interesting if you did though, not that i'd like it, but... I suppose it has been done before on haa so there's no reason why you can't, lol. Great chapter again! I love all the dialouge, you write the humour into it really nicely! Update soon!

OMG! That was a shocker! Loved all the interruptions again! Great work! Update soon!

I completely forgot i had been reading this! But now i'm really sad that it's ended! It was really clever how it was Belle, i really didn't have a clue until the beginning of that chapter when she told Aden. That last chapter was perfect!!! I'm a huge fan that you got them a dog cos i love dogs, lol. This was a really orginal idea and great to read! I hope you write more in the future! :D

This is great! I really like your fics! My heart nearly stopped when Aden made the comment about the baby photos, for a milisecond i thought it was funny and then i realised just before you wrote it. I'm glad Amanda kind of skimmed over it though. That was really sweet at the end with the photo. Can't wait for more! update soon!

lmao at Nicole's comment at the end! Loved it again! Especially the bit about the spare room and fostering etc. so true! Can't wait for another update!

I love where you're going with this and with Edward's character! It's really interesting to read! I really like that he feels Elsie and knows why she's following him! Can't wiat for the next update!

OMG! That ending was the saddest thing ever!!! You sure know how to hit the emotions hard! Seriously, just that line 'I'm sorry', it just made me cry! WOW! That was an amazing chapter! The scan was so cute! I loved that they went back to teasing but then you really skilfully got them back to the awkwardness in the bedroom! Her talk to him was so... wow! It's so sad that he still couldn't do it. Everything she said was perfect. I can't wait for the next update! Seriously!!!! You know how much i love this! SO SO SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!

Loved it once again! The school bag thing was funny! You seem to have kept them all quite in character as well, like Geoff and Annie's reactions. Can't wait for another update!

I just caught up with this! It's great! So so sad! I've nearly cried a couple of times! The dialogue between Ed and Elsie in that last chapter was so sweet and sad! Update soon!

That was amazing! Just a lovely summary of all the messages of the fic! I loved it! Clever doing the Aden/Belle bit first! I loved their conversation, it was so sweet! I'm sad this fic is over, i really enjoyed it! I hope you write more in the future, you're great at it! :D :D

I loved that! So funny! Especially the barbie doll thing! lmao! Can't wait for another update!!!

Love the discussion on the racy fluff! I was gonna say to you earlier about sex being best when the woman is pregnant so they really should! But you've made some good excuses why it might be a bit weird atm, lol. Can't wait for the next update anyway. I love the angst as much as the fluff, especially cos you write both so well.

Great chapter! I'm thinking that Belle might be pregnant too. Love the idea of the tattoos, funny and sweet! Can't wait for another update! Hope you feel fully better soon!

I love how the characters keep interrupting! ...and it seems like an interesting story line Belle and Aden have. This is a very 'outside the box' fic, which makes it really refreshing to read! It's good to go in to a fic where you know you're gonna laugh, considering how much angst is around other fics (not that that's not great too, but sometimes you do just need a laugh). Update soon!

Loved it! as always! Poor Aden, at least he managed to get some sleep though. I love the way it was mostly in there heads more so then dialogue, it was much more effective that way, and it was nice to get some of Aden's thoughts too. Can't wait for the next update! Soon PLEASE!!!!!!!!! EDIT: I just wanted to add that you are right at the top of my list for updates too cos yours is that amazingly brilliant! Thanks btw, that was really sweet of you!

OMG!!! This is hilarious!!! I love it!!!! I thought they were dreaming for a moment, but i love how you wrote the producer in, his dialouge was perfect! And then the Geoff being best man thing! lmao, kind of a spoofy fic! Can't wait for another update!

Aw that was sweet! Update soon!

YAY! You have no idea how glad I am that you updated!!! Once again, an awesome chapter! I loved Belle and Amanda's conversatoin and how she opened up, the way you described their relationship was great too! The scene with Aden and Belle was quite ominous after being sweet! I love how you've created this atmosphere that isn't quite tension but something else. You write it so well, i just love it! Poor Aden! I hope he talks to Belle soon! Can't wait for the next update, whenever it is!

LOVED that conversation!!! Great update! That's cool about the name thing! Update soon!