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Aw, that was so sweet! As usual!!! I love the idea of a beach wedding, your description of the colour of Mattie's dress was brilliant! I can't wait for their wedding! lol UPdate soon!!!!!!!!

Aw! That was such a cute chapter! I reckon Amanda's trying to help them out with somewhere to live too... Can't wait for more, please update soon!!!!! P.s. No constructive criticism, love it just the way it is!

Aw!!! that was so cute!!! I loved it!!!!! I can't wait for their wedding! I love that everytime they talk about the baby, you make them both physically protective of it, it's so sweet to read!!! update soon!!!!!!!!

Aw, that was amazing! I loved the conversation between Aden and Irene! Does Angelo know yet i wonder, he'll be mad if he doesn't and they haven't told him, to be fair it was his baby that died too... hmm... i confused myself because i don't like Angelo with Belle... obviously! Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!

Couldn't have said it better myself. Don't forget - 11. I have a boyfriend. That's ok let's have sex anyway. 12. My boyfriend found out we cheated and outed us in front of the whole town but it's okay because he did that, we can act like WE'RE the victims of the whole thing. I can't see their chemistry either and I don't see them lasting long term. How many times have they broken up already? I wouldn't be surprised if they didn't last until the end of next year. I agree with 7, 11 and maybe 12. But the rest just seem like any other hate to love TV relationship to me (i don't think it was rushed, took nearly six weeks from flirting to kiss!), just with different circumstances. Circumstances which i think shows the support that people do place in one another and support that is needed... I agree with Symphony that their relationship has been inspirational... Personally I think they've broken up twice (the 'skank' incident, what else was Aden supposed to do? He was scared that she would find out and want nothing to do with him anymore, as he said, it was easier to push her away. ...and the kidnapping) and they've been 'involved' (whether actually together or not) for about five months, i've known couples break up more times than that in that amount of time and get back together for much more stupid reasons than 'he kidnapped me', i think it was very valid of Belle to break up with him at this time, but she gave her reasons for breaking up with him when she gave her testimony at the trial and when he gave his, she saw that those reasons no longer existed because he had taken responsibility and knew that what he did was wrong. I think you're reasons are really valid and that's why i agree with some of them. I honestly don't know why or how i became so obsessed with Aden and Belle as a couple (it's not just because they're hot... single or together,) i do think they have an amazing chemistry. For me, i loved Drelle when they were together, but now i think Belle kind of grew out of him and Aden's her chance at a more meaningful, mature relationship as i think she knows how much she means to Aden and to be that in someone else's life must be an amazing feeling for her. For me they've kept the show alive when i've not even wanted to watch it anymore, i get that that's not the case for a lot of people, and i respect that but it's just my opinion. The fact that Todd and Jess are both such amazing actors helps a huge amount too!

Wow! Definitely one of the best fics i've EVER read!!!!!!!! Amazing all the way through, i think i cried or nearly cried in at least every chapter, purely because of how beautifully you wrote all the emotions and events! I loved that there was very little dialogue, it made everything happen on a kind of different level to reality and allowed us to see what the characters were REALLY thinking and feeling!!!! i seriously loved this whole story and that last chapter with them holding Zoie was so cute! And the proposal was so perfect!!!!! Brilliant! Amazing! Fantastic! and any other adjective equal or higher to these!!!!!!!! :D :D

Oh no! Belle! I'm glad you made it dramatic but poor Aden too!!! I wonder what Angelo will think! Amazing chapter!!!! Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!

Aw!!!!! That was so sweet!!!! i especially loved the 'both of you' bit at the end!!! I was so worried Aden was going to miss it for a minute then, thank God he didn't! Update soon!!!!!!

That was so beautiful... loved the name! I get the feeling you might be using life experiences to write this fic as you are always so accurately descriptive it's so easy to imagine the scenes you write... I can't wait for the next chapter but i really don't want it to end... it's so good! Update soon!

That was great! I loved how Mattie found out!!! Update soon!!!!!!

That was definitely my favourite chapter so far!!!!! You nearly had me in tears, it was so sweet and everything happened so perfectly! ...but poor Belle! I'm guessing there's something wrong with the pregnancy or she's having a miscarriage?? I hope Aden wakes up and helps her soon whatever it is! Please update soon!!! I LOVE this fic!!!!!!!!!!!

I loved the truth or dare! I loved the decorating for christmas! I loved the mistletoe! I loved Aden's reaction to belle telling Angelo she loved him and her own! ...and i loved the open window! I wonder where Aden went! Fantastic chapter!!!!! Update soon, please!!!!!!!!!

Aw!!!!!!!!!! I loved how Aden told Nicole, just throwing it in was so sweet! And the ending with the i hate you and i love you too!!! Loved it as always!!!! Update soooooon!!!!!!!!!

that was so beautiful yet again! I'm so glad that the baby is okay! I don't want this story to be over, it's sooooo good! Please update soon anyway though!

WOW... just WOW! there is no better word to descriibe that chapter, you're writing is always so moving, i really feel the character's emotions and i find myself leaning closer towards the screen as i get pulled deeper in to your writing... Please make Belle and the baby be okay, that image of Aden at the end was so sad... Please update soon!!!!!!!

I loved that scene, it was so sweet! especially the end, and Aden's comments! Update soon, pleeeeeeease!!!!!!!

Aw!!!!!!!!!! I loved it!!!!!!!! I just knew that he was going to text her but what he actually wrote was so... AWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!! Loved Belle getting stuck in his hoodie, and her annoyance with Angelo's texts! Awesome chapter, update soon!!!!!!

Chapter 21- almost had me in tears, was so sad to think of and beautfully written once again. Chapter 22 - OMG! That was so amazing... how he could tell there was something wrong and he was the only one, and then not caring about anything else other than Belle and the baby... i hope that shows the judge what a good person he is! He will be allowed to go to the hospital with her, won't he? Can't wait for the next update!!!!!!

The ending wasn't rushed at all! It was perfect! ...and when i say perfect i mean like absoloutely PERFECT!!!! I loved that fight, the way you conveyed Aden's emotions and how he was trying to make Belle understand was brilliant and yet the way Belle reacted made perfect sense when thinking about it from her POV! Fantastic chapter, really amazing, as in WOW standard! Update soon please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

That was fantastic as always!!!!!! I loved the flashback to Belle tellin Irene, it was so sweet how happy she was! ...and i'm glad she aired her feelings but her worry about the baby is worrying me... Please update again soon!!!!!!!! I love it!!!!!

LOVED that chapter!!!!! the board game thing was really sweet, and her shaving him! I'm a little stunned by the ending, it was brilliant but you made me feel kind of weird so the only way i can think to put it is stunned. It was perfect, the way they so nearly kissed but you brought Belle back to 'reality' and kind of awkwardly... excellent writing!!! Please update soon!!! I'm loving this!!!

i feel like i've just eaten ice cream with extra toppings of fluff!!!!!! I love how you just mix it in, like chocolate chips in mint ice cream! mmm... ice cream... Anyway, i loved that chapter, it was so cute with the Aden and Belle bits and i felt that Irene's reaction and her conversation with Belle was really realistic but i really can't tell whether Belle wants to get married just because of the baby or not, at first i thought she wanted to get married because she wanted to and the reasons did make sense but you've really been hinting at that she's getting married cos of the baby... i don't know what to think now... Well, at least the awesomeness of your writing keeps me occupied!!!!!!!!!! Please update soon! I can't wait! (I mean that literally!)

I like the ending and i'm glad they had both moved on. It was a great fic and great plot, it was really good to read!

Loved it! Loved it! Loved it! I love that Belle is always so protective of her baby, it's really sweet! Drew's hatred of her car is really funny but really fitting!!!! Please update REALLY soooooooooon!!!!!!!!!!!!

WOW... the description of the memories of his grandfather were just... WOW! Aden telling Belle about it almost had me in tears, you wrote that so well, it was fantastic! I loved the dialogue in this chapter, it was quirky and serious in the right places, it really fitted the storyline! (which i'm loving btw) Great chapter! Probably my favourite so far! Please update soon!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!