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The Boy With The Thorn In His Side (by monkeysmoke) - comments
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Yep, you all saw it coming! I was going to change the plot to surprise everyone but it was too good a plot line to resist so i kept it how it was. I'm glad, because it's amazing! Are you going to update again soon/today?? -
A Second Chance? (by HeavenForbid) - comments
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Great update! I liked Belle's thoughts at the end!!!!! Update soon! -
The Boy With The Thorn In His Side (by monkeysmoke) - comments
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Please update RIGHT NOW!!!! I love how you've actually explained why Kirsty and Aden felt that connection when they first met! I loved the dialogue in this chapter! It was so realistic with the way Larry was speaking to Irene and Kirsty! (It usually is! lol) Please please please update now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! -
Are the trip to the city and the receipt Mattie found related???? I want to know the answers!!! Great chapter! loved the bits with Nicole and Aden, they were so sweet! And Aden and Bele aol as usual!!!! I can't believe there's only two more chapters left!!! Please update soon!
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Loved them! thank you so much for updating! Your descriptions of Belle's thoughts and feelings are amazing! and i could just see Aden behaving like that! Please update soon!
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The Boy With The Thorn In His Side (by monkeysmoke) - comments
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Please update again!!!!!!! You are being so mean with these cliffhangers!!!!! Loved that chapter!!! MORE! RIGHT NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!! -
The Boy With The Thorn In His Side (by monkeysmoke) - comments
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LOVED those chapters! I want to know who Kirsty's family are, why is Irene so shocked? I have this little voice in my head telling me that Aden is connected to Kirsty's family somehow, which would explain the connection they feel towards one another... i so hope that voie is right. But even if it's not, i can't wait to find out the truth!!!! Please update soon!! Again, now maybe???? -
A Second Chance? (by HeavenForbid) - comments
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Glad that Belle is being honest with Oliver but i think they should become more than 'just friends'. Just a dedicated Adellite's opinion! lol Hopefully you might feel the same...? Great update, i hope Mattie doesn't hurt Ric and that they'll be able to work things out! Update soon! -
WOW! That was sooooo my COMPLETELY FAVOURITE CHAPTER EVER!!!!!!!!!!! I have tears in my eyes now, i loved that you did most of it from Belle's POV... and that nightmare in the middle of the night and her reaction to him was just...aol sadly. Then that bit at the end where Aden wouldn't listen to her telling him to stop to start with... that just fitted so perfectly! I could understand why he would do that, and then what she said to him and how you finished it off... I just cannot describe the absolute amazingness, brilliance, excellence, fantasticness, wonderfulness that this chapter was! Your writing makes it all the more impacting! I don't know what i can write to actually explain how good this chapter really was! definitely worth the wait, and i agree with monkeysmoke, makes up for no diwana!
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The Boy With The Thorn In His Side (by monkeysmoke) - comments
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Aw! That was soooooo good! I love how he didn't completely attack her when she asked him what was going on, yet he didn't tell her the whole truth either. He really just told her what he was able to tell her... that was so well written! I'm really loving these Adelle chapters! For a moment there, i thought you might let them kiss! But oh no! Please update soon!!! And lots!!!!!!!!! -
Sorry i was too tired to comment yesterday! It was awesome, poor Aden, that was so sad! I loved Nicole's reactions to everything and the way Belle just sat with him at the end was aol!! Can't wait for the next update!
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The Boy With The Thorn In His Side (by monkeysmoke) - comments
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73. WOW! That was described so amazingly! I was definitely crying! I loved how you described Belle's presence and what it meant to him, it seemed so right that he should sleep in her bed after that... 74. That was so sad, conceived by rape, that must be so horrible for Kirsty. Please update soon! I want to know what's going to happen to Ollie!!! -
OMG! I LOVE this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It's soooooo good! Wonderful idea! Wonderful writing!!! I can't believe you're leaving it there for today! I loved that chapter when they were both lying in bed by themselves but needing the other one! It was so short but i almost cried!!!! Please update soon!!!!! I REALLY REALLY REALLY love this fic!!!!!
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*tear* That was so good. the letter was so sad and that last line just summed everything up perfectly! Excellent oneshot!!!
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Stockholm Syndrome (by Louise_2983) - comments
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WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW!!!!!!! The start was so sweet and sad! Aden... awwwwww!!!!!!! He was so sweet going to get the tests for her! I hate that Angelo's so happy about the prenancy but i guess it makes sense... can't you make it so Belle is further along than she thought and it's actually Aden's baby???? Hmm... Poor poor Aden, he needs to be with Belle and Belle needs to be with him!!! I LOVED this line!!!!!!!!!!!! Please update soon!!! I love this fic, your writing style is awesome!!!!!!! -
The Boy With The Thorn In His Side (by monkeysmoke) - comments
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I had a daft grin too!!!! lol That was so good with Geoff finding him and shouting! I loved Aden's reaction, that he didn't lash out but you could still see that he doesn't like Geoff. Annie and Aden's relationship is so good!!!!! I love it!!!!! ...and then Aden in Belle's room! that was so cute!!!!! I want them to kiss again!!! Please make it happen... soon!!!!! UPdate soon! NOW!!!!!!!!! -
Aw! That was so cute with his Mum's stuff and the jewellery!!! What's happened with Aden' dad?????????????? You have to update NOW!!!!! Please!!!! You can run but you can't hide!!!!! Excellent chapter as always, can't wait for more!!! Update soon!!!
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The Boy With The Thorn In His Side (by monkeysmoke) - comments
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Great update! I loved the Roman and Nicole interaction! Please update soon!!!!! -
The Boy With The Thorn In His Side (by monkeysmoke) - comments
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Thank you! thank you! Thank you! I so needed that, i've just been reading through articles preparing for tomorrow and that gave me such a good break!!! I'm so glad you did an Aden/Belle chapter, they both put their defences up at exactly the right moments, i loved how Belle used her own experiences to help him. Annie was really sweet too, i love how she has this thing going on with Aden that Belle can't understand. Can't wait for more!!!! UPdate soon! PLEASE!!! -
The Boy With The Thorn In His Side (by monkeysmoke) - comments
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Awesome! You even made me like Annie and Jai! (i don't particularly like them in the real thing, lol.) You're getting the sort of relationship they're forming absolutely perfect! Poor Aden, i loved how you continued his storyline on like that! I can see why he wouldn't want to go back to Roman's now. I hope the next chapter continues with him at Irene's??? Please update soon! You know how i love it when you do! -
The Boy With The Thorn In His Side (by monkeysmoke) - comments
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Aw! That was brilliant!!! Please update soon!!! You have to make Ollie okay, i want to know who's going to be his donor! -
The Boy With The Thorn In His Side (by monkeysmoke) - comments
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That was an awesome chapter! As always! thanks for the Aden-ness, i loved that scene with Nicole, you made it so realistic! I felt really sorry for both of them, i expect Nicole thinks he ran off because of her... did Nicole leave her mum for the same reason as the show or is there a different one in your fic? Please update soon!!! And when i say soon, you know i mean like REALLY REALLY SOON!!!! -
Stockholm Syndrome (by Louise_2983) - comments
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WOW. WOW. WOW. That was so sad! I was crying! The eulogy, was just so... beautiful. I thought Belle excused herself to walk home with him as well, it was really sad that she didn't. I loved her explanation as to why she slept with Angelo, just perfect! Their reunion was also magnificent! And just to add to the awesomeness of the plot of this chapter, you're writing just cranked it up that much further! I loved the dialogue, i could totally see and feel the character's emotions! Please update soon! I don't care if we hate you, it just means you'll get more comments!!! -
Awesome chapter!!! For some reason, i just love it when they argue! You can tell it's because they love each other which makes it so aol! Aden was being so sweet but i can understand where Aden is coming from too. Please update soon!!!!!
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The Boy With The Thorn In His Side (by monkeysmoke) - comments
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Thanks so much! It definitely helped, but it's only a very short term cure without Aden in it, and i can feel myself beginning to get weak again... oh no! Only Aden will be able to cure me now! PLEASE!!!!!! HELP ME!!! lol! Great chapter, very well written as always, you write the characters just as they are on the show! Please update again tonight! (you know what i want!!!)