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wrongturntaken

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  1. Wo-ow! That was so moving yet again! You are such an incredible writer, you have my crying practically at every chapter!!! This is so good, i love how you've been playing with the scenes slightly and how you delved so deep into the characters reasoning and feelings! It's so good!!! I hope you update soon!
  2. Chapter 3. I have never read anyone describe Aden's abuse in such an incredible way... the way you switched between tenses must have been really difficult to do but you completely made it work... Aden's nightmare and unsure whether he was 6 or 17 was so moving, you literally had me crying... You are an amazing writer because you have made me completely feel for the characters and what they are going through, especially Aden... Chapter 4. You made me completely understand what was going on with Belle and why she made that decision! Completely EXCELLENT writing!!!!!!!! I CANNOT WAIT for the next update!
  3. Aw! Excellent! Update soon!
  4. AW!!! The position they woke up in was so adorable!!!!!!!!!! Great chapter! More please!!!
  5. It's funny, cos people keep saying 'wow' and after reading the first chapter, that was all i could think to say too! Seriously... WOW! The writing and the way you are capturing Aden and Belle's emotions is fantastic, i like the reasoning behind the way they're feeling too! It makes a lot of sense! I am really looking forward to your next update!
  6. Awesome! I loved Aden's reaction to Belle's news, it fitted really well!! The ending was really great too, i could completely imagine that! Please update soon!
  7. Ooh! I am so intrigued!!!!! Is Justin gay?!?!?!? I missed a couple of updates so i just had to catch up with some VERY good chapters! You are really making me feel for all the characters and i can't wait to see what's going to happen!!!
  8. Aw! It's sad that Belle feels so insecure about her relationship but i can kind of see where she's coming from. Great chapter! update soon!
  9. I really enjoyed that chapter! It was really realistic! Was the password 'nine' because she has nine charms or something like that? I'm probably wrong, lol cos then she'd have to constantly change it every time she got a new one! Ah, well now i'm at a loss! I can't wait for the next update!
  10. Woah! I seriously was not expecting that!!! I'm a little confused though, both babies are Aden's; yes? So why did Belle still give one away or did she not find out who the father's were until she'd already done it? It was fantastic anyway! Very interesting idea for a fic, please update soon!
  11. Aw! thank you!! That was an awesome chapter once again!!! I loved the scene with Belle and Aden kissing on Nicole's car! So cute! And Aden in sun glasses! HOT!!! i can't wait to see how things play out with Drew, should be interesting!!!! Please update soon again! I love it!!!!!
  12. Wow! You've had me in tears! I really was not expecting chloe to die! It's so sad... and what is Belle hiding? I really thought it could be that Aden wasn't her father as well but now i'm clueless... I hope you update soon, it's great!
  13. I loved it again! The charm was so cute! I don't know why, but i'm really interested in what Belle's password is! (i wonder if Aden will actually work it out?) lol
  14. AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please update soon again! An infinite amount of chapters a day would be lovely!!!!!!!!!
  15. I want to apologise to Nicole for doubting her!!! Next chapter should be amazing, i seriously can't wait! This one was pretty awesome too!!!
  16. That's so funny cos that was exactly what i was thinking just before i read your posts! lol I went over their fight and I kind of get the feeling they haven't slept together in a while (although i'm probably wrong), i hope you tell us what the new charm is about too... Anyway, great chapter! Their fight was really realistic!!! I can't wait so please please please make it soon??
  17. I loved the start! The dialogue was so spot on with all of the characters! Aden and Belle's fight at the end was just like i'd have imagined! It was great and i can't wait for the next update!
  18. WOW WOW WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE LOVE LOVED IT!!! ABSOLUTELY ALL OF IT! THE ENDING WAS SOOOOO SWEET AND THE CHARM WITH THE A AND THE B WAS SOOOO ADORABLE!!! I CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE SEQUEL!!!! I'M WRITING ALL OF THIS IN CAPITAL LETTERS SO YOU UNDERSTAND JUST HOW MUCH I LOVED YOUR STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I WOULD DO NEVER ENDING EXCLAMATION MARKS IF I COULD JUST TO EMPHASISE THIS FURTHER!!!! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR MAKING ME LAUGH, CRY AND AW! AND NOW I'M OFF TO READ THE SEQUEL! :D :D
  19. I really thought they were finally going to get back together and then you added that twist!!! Which was excellent btw. Please update soon, i LOVE this fic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
  20. That was so awesome! Aden and the clothes - soooo funny!!! And the ending - aw!!!! I loved this bit: Nailing the window shut would certainly annoy him! I don't want this story to end, please update soon!!!
  21. Well, that was intriguing!!! Can't wait!!!!
  22. I LUUUUUUURVE the fluff!!! It's so nice to read the really cute scenes of them, especially at the moment! Fantastic update!
  23. I just brainstormed the next couple of chapters so hopefully one will be written by tonight or possibly tomorrow (if its tonight it will most likely be late). Thanks for reading though, i'm glad you're enjoying it!
  24. OMG, is nicole going to tell Geoff!!!!!!!! What a traitor! That was so sweet of Aden when he was talking to Angelo! Please update soon, i love it!
  25. That was awesome! I loved the way you described Belle breaking down into Aden, i could totally see it happening! I will be sad when this fic ends as it's one of my absolute favourites!!
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