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I think that was probably one of my favourite chapters! You're description of Aden's reaction to his nightmares and then how Belle dealt with them was just so... i can't even describe it. Fantastic! I really really really loved this chapter! Update soon!

Chapter 9??? Well then you are just going to have to update every hour!!! I'm really loving this, please update soon!

Great update! The scene with Aden in the shower was kind of sad. I liked the scenes with him and Belle working in the diner, i hope we get some more of that, and i'm wondering what Irene's reaction will be when she finds out too!! Update soon!!!

This is a great idea! I'm really interested to know what happened to Aden and Belle and i can't wait for them to see each other again! I hope you update soon!

Great start! Definitely continue!

I was just thinking the same thing as ezaz8??? Great chapter! Still want more though!!! Please update soon!!!

Yes he did but on the day that Aden got sentenced after his trial, he only tried to this time but Aden stopped him. I don't dislike Angelo, i just needed a villain and he was there... lol You'll figure out more about him in the next chapter...

Aw! that was such a great chapter! the dialogue was hilarious and the Nicole/Roman dialogue was so true to the show!! Excellent chapter!!! update soon!!!

I loved this chapter! It really felt like a proper scene and it was good to see some interaction with Drew/Ric and Belle! Very funny too! Update soon!

Great updates! i still want Aden though... next chapter? please updates soon, all your updates are great, with whatever characters are in them!

I went from 'oh no' to 'aw' to 'hehe' in that chapter! Very well executed! The bit where Belle was comforting him was so cute and i like that you added a bit of angry Aden too. Nicole's tattoo was a nice touch, i could actually see her getting one! update soon!

Loved it! I can't wait for more, especially to see Aden start working at the diner! Please update soon! Maybe when you're back???

Excellent chapter once again! I just reread the whole story because it is so good! I loved the Aden/Belle interaction, the dialogue was really witty and i loved the 'God, you're a jerk' joke! Yet again it's as though i'm living in Aden's mind, this is so AMAZING! Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D :D

Aden and Belle interaction was awesome!!!!!! I really ABSOLUTELY CANNOT WAIT for the next chapter!!!! Update soon???

I just caught up on the last few chapters and they were AMAZING!!!!!!!! What is going on with Aden though!?!?!? I'm really intrigued!! Please updates soon!!

That was amazing! I loved the end, i could completely get into Aden's head and his differing reactions to Cassie made so much sense! I love your story so much!!!! Please update soon! (as in NOW!) :D :D

I LOVED Aden's outburst at Belle! I really felt that he just wanted to protect himself from being hurt, because he knew if he saw Belle and she was married, he's the one that would get hurt and i think that's why he's telling her to stay away. I loved the way he said it too, i could completely see it playing out that way, with him being that hard, the comment about the black heart was a little extreme but i can understand why he would say it out of anger. I also loved how you explained what had happened on that night and how Aden didn't care about just saying straight out to Belle about their night together, ignoring Mattie and Emmy! Amazing update! I can't wait for more!

Hilarious! Loved the last comment!!!!

WOW! Thank you SOOOOOOOOOOOO much for those updates! I think you ought to quit whatever job you do have and become a professional writer, because you are seriously that good unless you are actuallyl a professional writer, in which case; don't quit! The scene with Larry and Aden was AMAZING! I could see every aspect of it playing out exactly the right way for the characters, i like that Aden seemed indifferent to him at first and then gradually had the confidence to confront Larry and you described his reaction so well! I really really really really cannot wait for the next update! No joke, i am literally going to be checking every 5 minutes to see if you've updated! That's just how good this is! :D

hmm... Aden just in his boxers Great chapter, loved the way Belle got him up! I soooooooooo love any fluff!!!!!!!!! More soon please!!!

Aw, that was so sweet! I'm glad they finally sorted out their issues with one another! Very cute, i loved it! I hope for another update soon!

Excellent update! You weaved Annie's character from the show into your Annie perfectly! I really like where you're going with her! I loved how you described the way Aden was through Belle, and i love what you are doing with those characters! Please please more more more!!!!!!!!!!1 :D

i somehow managed not to read the last two chapters before i commented... The one where Aden was sat on his own thinking was incredible! I agree with Taniya_K, it was really like i was in his mind. I loved how you made everything start at the car crash because i really think that after that was when you could actually see odd snippets in the show that told you there was something wrong. The way you described his relationship with his father and how football wasn't there anymore... it's just amazing! I loved that it was Belle who found him and that she's actually begun to see that Aden's not all he seems... your description of her photography and the reason she takes pictures was yet again... incredible! This story is so good, it's probably got the least dialogue of any fic i've read but because you allow us to enter the character's mind it's like we would know what they would say... I seriously cannot wait for more so please please please please x infinite update soon! (with lots of chapters!)

I loved it again! The way you brought Irene into it was ligtly funny so that it worked perfectly! I hope you update soon!!

Before you got to the scene with Aden and Annie i thought it was going to be long but after that i just completely got lost and it was as though there was no time... I loved that you did an Aden/Annie scene, and the fact that it was so beautifully written made it extra special! It was the kind of talk i could actually see them having! I loved it, please update soon!