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Nicole is so funny! I loved Belle's irritation with her, worked perfectly!!! Aden came in at the best moment! It was awesome but please update again, i have been having TBWATIHS withdrawal symptoms because you haven't updated, i.e. not eating, not sleeping, continuous refreshing of the fanfiction bttb page, the list goes on... Please cure me, i just need regular (hourly) updates and then i'll be healthy again, lol!

Aw! It's so sad how they broke up... Update soon! Please!!!

Awesome update!!! I LOVED the fluff at the start! That was so sweet!!! I liked what you did with the pictures, very clever way to discover Larry is still in the bay! Poor Belle and Aden! Aden needds to stop blaming himself, it's not his fault!! Anyway, i am intrigued as to what will happen next!! Please update soon!!! I love this fic so much, especially at the weekend or non Adelle days of the show, it's like i pretend it's the real thing so i can have a fix of something new from Adelle! :D P.s. When you said about Ric, Mattie and Belle in the diner, for some reason my imagination went to the old diner and when i realised it wasn't when you said about the computers, i got all sad! lol

Finished? NO! NEVER! You can not let that happen!!!!!! Great update! Belle and Aden asleep together was so sweet! I wonder if Belle's injuries from Aden's nightmares will be found out about or get worse?? Great stuff with Amanda! very believable! I cant wait for the next chapter!!! Please update soon!!!

That was awesome!!! I loved it!!! I loved how Roman thought that whoever he was with would get her heart broken because he was still in love with Belle, it seemed really realistic!

Wow! I loved that! it was a great way for him to find out! I need more of what's going to happen next though!!! Please update soon!!!!

AW! That was AMAZING! I loved how you structured Miles' behaviour like that, it was really hard hitting and i thought what you did with Aden worked really well, i could see him behaving like that in that kind of situation... it was such a brilliant way to tell us that he got tested! I wanna read more, update soon! Now? PLEASE!!!!

I'm sorry! I've been too tired to comment when i actually read the last two chapters! But they were amazing!!!! I love that Larry did that (not really but for the story, lol,) it seemed like a total role reversal! Poor Aden and Belle! He's really putting them through hell! I hope Belle is going to be okay! Please update soon! as in NOW maybe???

Love love loved those last two chapters!!! I loved Annie's thinking at the end! The last one was sweet, funny, charming, endearing, sad, passionate, compassionate, and many other emotions that you included so well! I love how you've included this Gladys character, she gives Aden and Belle a lot to work with and Aden was so funny at the end! I was just wondering if Belle actually heard that bit though??? Please update soon????

Go Belle!!!! I loved it when she was telling them both where to go! It was also very Aden like to ignore what she'd said and come and see her anyway! aol I loved all the humour in it, you wrote it really well, a perfect blend!!! Excellent chapter! I can't wait for the next one! Update soon, pleeeeeeeease!?!?!?!?!?

WOW! I loved what you did with Aden's dream and the present time, it worked so well! and was so sad! I can't wait for the next update, like i usually can't! lol Please make it soon!!!!

AW! AW! AW!!!!!!!!! AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (and constantly in my head) Them playing the game was so cute, and the way they were kissing each other! I loved it like i always do, it's always good to read this fluff!!!!!!! Update soon!!!!

Great chapter! I had the same feeling as Taniya, i hope we're right as it would be very interesting to see how you handled that! Can't wait for more! Please update soon! Again tonight??

Ooh, great update! I loved the flash back! Poor Aden! It's so sad to see how happy they were then and what they're like now. Can't wait for this confrontation! Please update soon!

I wanna know!!!! You have to tell us! I'm already in too much suspense about tomorrow!!! PLeeeeeease!!!! I loved the scene in the diner, was so cute! as always, i love you for fluff! It's always so awesome!!! Can't wait for you update!!! Until then i have work to be doing, 9.00 start tomorrow!

lmao off at Nicole's redecorating! I'm glad Aden was being more light hearted with Roman and Nicole, it was nice to see a bit of that and you worked Roman's attitudes about parenting in really well, Nicole's character came across really well in this chapter! Please update soon! like now?

Wow... when you described the children in the unit it was so sad, had me in tears. That was so emtional i can't even put exclamation marks in this comment because i don't feel it's appropriate. Amazing chapter once again. Please update soon? (notice the lack of emoticon too, not because it doens't merit one, just because i'd feel bad if i were to smile at such a sad chapter) i would also lol there if i thought it was appropriate...

that was yet another one of my favourite chapters! Completely realistic!!! (don't ever worry about that, it's like your speciality) I loved the scene with Aden and his Dad, it was so sad! I love that Nicole keeps kind of popping in places at the most awkward of times, it really makes it more interesting, you keep it written well so it doesn't get confusing. I don't think i described what i meant very well but what i was trying to say is that i love how you use all the character's to further the plots! Anyway, another update tonight maybe??? Aden/Ollie scene maybe... at the hospital... with Kirsty??? Write whatever you want and i'll love it! How could i not, it's you!!! P.s. I haven't been appreciating Roman enough in my comments, he's awesome in this fic and i'm glad he's trying to reach out to Aden, he knows pretty much how to handle him now but you can see through your chapters that it took some working out! Just pure brilliance is what you are!!!

Nice ending!!! Even if it is unfair! lol. I want to see Belle's reaction! That was a fantastic chapter! The Aden/Belle interaction was really sad! Especially when he got upset about not saying that he loved his dad! AOL! UPdate soon pleeeeeeeease!!!!!!!

OMG! Poor Ollie!!!! You have to update soon!!! I want Ollie to be alright, and the sooner you update the sooner he is alright!!! Brilliant written chapter as always! NOW????

That was amazing! Belle's reactions in the diner when talking to Roman were perfect, Aden in Miles' class was awesome, i'm glad he had that outburst, he must really hate being thought of as the same as Axel. Aden and Belle's scene in the diner... aw, that hug was yet again a descriptive miracle! Seriously, the way that you described how they got into it and how they got out... wow! I loved Aden's thoughts about Kirsty at the end... i wonder what he'll do now. I hope Ollie is going to be okay too!!! Please update soon????

Aw! I'm still loving the fluff!!!! Aden making Belle pancakes is so sweet! Even though it was a really small thing, i'm glad Aden dropped Annie off at school, it just shows how far they've come. Irene and Angelo, hmm... i was half expecting Aden to see Angelo walking down the stairs in the morning instead of Annie! lol Great update, please another one soon!?!?!?

OH. MY. GOD.!!!!!!!!!!! Belle and Aden's kiss was only the BEST first kiss i have EVER read in fan fiction, a play or a REAL novel!!! Seriously, the way you described that scene has me in tears just thinking about it, it was that beautifully descriptive! I loved that Irene caught them, loved the scene with Irene/Belle, LOVED the scene with Aden and Kirsty! ...and the one with Aden and Nicole, i really love how you are keeping Aden's secret going but yet it never gets boring! I can't wait to see Aden face Belle now, and i love how he's worried about what she's going to say, the poor guy!!! so to sum up, I LOVED THOSE UPDATES!!! WOW! WOW! WOW! WOW! Please update soon and often again?!?!?!? P.s. Poor Ollie, i hope he is okay! P.p.s. I'm just going to go and read that first kiss again because it was just that awesome!

OMG that was sooooo cute at the start!!!!!! I was just like aw, aw, aw, aw... awwwwwwwwww!!!!!! OOh, what did Aden buy?!?!? Update NOW!!!!! (do bullying tactics work with you???)

Chapter 47 - WOW! and AWWWWW!!!!! I loved their interaction and especially how you are describing the two's feelings for one another, especially from the kind of relationship they had before to what they have now! seriously good, i loved the cute bit as well and i can't wait for Aden's interview with the police! For some reason i really want Kirsty present, lol. Are there any more Aden/Kirsty scenes coming up soon, especially now that she's the only one that knows the truth, oh except Annie i guess. Chapter 48 - Great scene, i really like the Kirsty/Jai interaction. I don't particularly like Kirsty on the show now she's back (i liked her before) but in your fic she's still alright so it's good, lol. Anyway, please update soon... again... now!??!?!? (i know i always ask but please???? with the police and Aden scene maybe???? but whatever you have planned will be brilliant so just make it snappy! lol