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A Second Chance? (by HeavenForbid) - comments
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What happened to the baby? That's so sad! Please update soon! I want answers!!! -
That was the most perfect ending ever!!! So beautifully written and I have a tear in my eye! I loved the links at the end!!! Your story has been absolutely fantastic and i really hope you write another one soon!!!! :D :D
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The Boy With The Thorn In His Side (by monkeysmoke) - comments
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I LURVE how you brought Nicole in to it!!!! Excellent update! More please!!! -
The Boy With The Thorn In His Side (by monkeysmoke) - comments
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I agree with MissOlivia22!! Who's at the door?!?!?!? Please please please please please please please update tonight!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! P.s. my thoughts on the actual chapter are that it was awesome! I loved how you described Aden being angry at Kirsty now and the way the memories of his mother were so sad! -
Stockholm Syndrome (by Louise_2983) - comments
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I REALLY like this!!!! Excellent writing style always helps, so five stars on that front! I loved the Wizard of Oz metaphor! Interesting idea with Geoff wanting Belle's help with that kind of assignment! I'm definitely looking forward to more of this!!! Update soon!! -
OMG! That was.... WOW! I got so in to that, my head was just zooming into the computer screen, . The dialogue and the way you portrayed it, i could so easily see it in my head, and both the characters made so much sense in what they were saying that i could see it from both sides of the argument. Which is why i'm gonna choose Drew... i hate myself for even saying that, even as a joke... it is COMPLETELY ADEN ALL THE WAY!!!!!! I liked how Belle never gave in but kind of wanted to explain to Drew the real reason she knew Aden had changed. The background history about Aden trying to kill his dad was good too! Update soon!!! I love these scenes with Drew... more please!!!
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The Boy With The Thorn In His Side (by monkeysmoke) - comments
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That was once again fantastic! The way you described his nightmare was so sad but it totally felt like a dream! Amazing! I loved Roman's reaction to his sleeping too! Please make it like yesterday and have 4 (or more) updates today??? Pretty please???? -
The Boy With The Thorn In His Side (by monkeysmoke) - comments
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Thank you for so many updates! They've all been amazing! This one was really cute, i loved the comedy in it! Please update soon (again today)???? -
That was excellent!!!! The dialogue in this chapter was so natural and so realistic!!!! I loved both of the character's thoughts and reactions to each other! Absolutely fantastic! Update soon!
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A Second Chance? (by HeavenForbid) - comments
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Great chapter! I can't wait for the next one! Update soon! -
The Boy With The Thorn In His Side (by monkeysmoke) - comments
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WOW!! WOW! WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW!!! I cannot say that enough times! The way you described Annie and Aden holding hands and why... and then how Annie had someone to fall into but Aden didn't... just incredible, i cried at that bit! It seemed perfectly reasonable for him to spill everything to Kirsty which i wouldn't have thought it would, but you wrote it so brilliantly it just fitted so well. I love what you've done with her character and i can't wait to see it go further. Irene's reaction to Aden's presence was also perfect! Aden and Roman's conversation... yet again fantastic! I just cannot even comprehend the amazingness if this fic!!! Sooooo good!!! Please update again! Like today!! pretty pretty pretty please!!! -
That was a great chapter! Geoff and Aden both made a lot of sense! Can't wait for the next one!
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That was brilliant!!!! I loved the way the informatiion unfolded between them! I wonder what Aden's going to do now?? update soon!
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Brothers On The Run (by whispered_envy) - comments
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Great chapter! Sean and Justin were being so sweet! I'm glad they know what's best for Aden, even if he doesn't. Please update soon!!! -
Great chapter! what secrets are Belle hiding? update soon?
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A Second Chance? (by HeavenForbid) - comments
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I can't wait for more! What's gonna happen????? Update soon, please! -
The Boy With The Thorn In His Side (by monkeysmoke) - comments
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Thank you so much for updating!!!! I hope they find Annie and Aden still on the beach. Fantastic chapter! I loved the scene with Roman and Larry! Awesome!! Please update 3, 4, 5... times tomorrow??? and in case you didn't get that, it was update three hundred and forty five times tomorrow! But if you can't manage that; two will do! Pretty please???? -
Brothers On The Run (by whispered_envy) - comments
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Yay! I thought they might do that! great chapter! I'm loving the new brotherly dynamic they have now! Update soon? :D -
Aw, that was really sweet. His mother's items and the picture of him as a baby. I loved the description of his eyes. Very good chapter and had a really brilliant ending, you seemed to just have this calm tone throughout it which really fitted the chapter. Update soon?
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The Boy With The Thorn In His Side (by monkeysmoke) - comments
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WOW! I'm nearly in tears! That was so beautiful, and Aden's reaction and why he couldn't help her was so heartbreaking! I'm glad Annie realised how distressed he was and i can't wait to see the other's reactions! Please update soon! As in maybe tonight again??? -
The Boy With The Thorn In His Side (by monkeysmoke) - comments
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I second MissOlivia22!!!!!! PLEEEEEEEEEASE!!!! -
A Second Chance? (by HeavenForbid) - comments
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Ooh, i am intrigued! Who did Aden phone? Great chapter! Excellent writing! Please update soon! -
That was an awesome chapter! I love what you are doing with Drew in this fic, it's so good, it's just what i would want to happen in the real thing! Great writing! And how could you leave it there?!?!?!? What happened to Aden?!?!?!? Update... NOW!!!!
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The Boy With The Thorn In His Side (by monkeysmoke) - comments
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I'm so glad it was Aden that saved her! An amazing chapter!!! I really can't wait to see what's going to happen! Will Aden be the one to bring her home?? Please update soon... and LOTS!!!! -
Wow! That was brilliant! I loved it! I'm so glad they got together!!!! Can't wait for the final chapter!