Inactive User Posted September 14, 2014 Report Share Posted September 14, 2014 Awesome chapter, Jen Update soon please Xxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted September 14, 2014 Report Share Posted September 14, 2014 Had a look on Wikipedia and it looks like the character you're thinking of was called Jake Twomey.Sorry, Jen! I wasn't expecting to see Steph again, so that was a surprise, although it wasn't exactly smiles and well wishes.Lots of nice little touches like Sasha putting her foot in it and Dex's response.And autocorrect, the work of the devil... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jen Posted September 14, 2014 Report Share Posted September 14, 2014 Had a look on Wikipedia and it looks like the character you're thinking of was called Jake Twomey.Sorry, Jen! Dang it! I don't know why I latched on to that name! Pretend I mentioned nothing ... Thanks for the quick feedback Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted September 15, 2014 Report Share Posted September 15, 2014 Well Dex might be sick but he can still get April into his bed. No joking that was sweet and dare I say it touching. I have this feeling that you're leading us towards heartbreak by the end in some way. I'm starting to wonder if it will be Dex who dies or someone else His hair growing back could be a good sign that his getting slowly better? Steph's return felt like she was in some ways visiting Dex for her own benefit. Brilliant chapter Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JosieTash Posted September 16, 2014 Report Share Posted September 16, 2014 (edited) As BRILLIANT as ever !!!! REALLY especially loved ........ - Dex's response to Sasha's "I would rather DIE ........ " - Steph's "eating away at your filter" line - the whole "Darren Criss" chat - the "little spoon" / "it was just sleeping, in the most innocent sense of the word" sequence Sooooooooooooooooooooo can't wait for more !!!! Edited September 16, 2014 by JosieTash Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted September 21, 2014 Report Share Posted September 21, 2014 Wow, from Dexter wanting a pet meerkat onwards that was brilliant.I really wasn't expecting the chapter to go that way when it started but bringing in Casey and having his attempts to make light of the situation continually falter was a great idea.Looking forward to more! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted September 21, 2014 Report Share Posted September 21, 2014 Great chapter Liked Dexter and Casey's friendship. Update soon please Xxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jen Posted September 21, 2014 Report Share Posted September 21, 2014 It's only just occurred to me how strange these next couple of chapters are going to be given the state of the show at the moment. Clearly I had no idea what was coming when I wrote this. Also, I originally just wanted to write a one-shot of Casey having to baby-sit Dex after the crash, but then there was that nice moment with Romeo on the show and I couldn't ever fit this in, so I wrote it into this story. It makes me oddly sad now. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted September 22, 2014 Report Share Posted September 22, 2014 Great chapter Aww April had to leave and didn't want to leave Dex liked Casey babysitting Dex I look forward to more update again soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JosieTash Posted September 23, 2014 Report Share Posted September 23, 2014 (edited) Sooooooooooooo gripping and emotional, especially ..... Now, all he thinks is how the circle of life continues, even though something is dead. The cheetah saw the antelope as nothing but prey, devouring every scrap of meat until it was nothing but a carcass. Did it all without any sense of guilt or shame, and doesn’t even register that it is no longer alive. It just gets on with its day. If things don’t work out, if all of this fighting is futile, then is Dex just sitting prey, waiting for the cheetah to come along? And if it strikes, will life go on without him as if nothing happened. This is what he has been reduced to; watching tv and struggling to change the channel. He used to be so much more, and it’s almost scary; the velocity at which he has fallen. Dex shakes his head, ferociously this time, knows that’s exactly what he doesn’t want. This is the first time since the hospital that he’s been left alone, albeit with Casey Braxton – who clearly has better things to do – and he’s not going to let his failing body ruin it. He also can’t have April think he can’t do this on his own. He needs to be able to do this without her. If his lip so much as quivered as a kid, Heath would promptly punch him in the ribs and tell him to stop being such a girl. Now, Dex is tearing up over something as inconsequential as a tv remote and Casey is so out of his depth. ADORED it !!!!!!!! Edited September 23, 2014 by JosieTash Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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