bay girl Posted September 25, 2006 Report Share Posted September 25, 2006 I really enjoyed that. I hope you continue. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sevenpuddings Posted September 25, 2006 Report Share Posted September 25, 2006 Do you really have to ask? I loved it, from beginning to end. As soon as I read Kit's thoughts about Hayley, I was in fits of laughter. I mean, I thought cliche, but who doesn't love a cliche thrown in the beginning of a teen fic thats obviously going to create more drama and tension that I can begin to comprehend? I love the cliques that you've set up. Noah and Will would have worked so well with Kim, and I can just imagine him trailing around after Hayley (hmm, sound familar?) but still being addictied to Gypsy. I also could so totally see Hayley, Martha and Cassie being the evil witches that rule the school. I love the way you've written them, I must admit, I instantly hated them, I don't know if it was the desired effect, but it was there for me! I'll admit, you messed around with a few of my all time favourite couples, but I was prepared for anything when I read it, you gave me the warning, and I think you'll just have to continue *hint hint* so I can either learn to love the ships, or be amazed and confused every time you throw another one into the mix. To sum up the mega long review, PLEASE CONTINUE, I'll bribe you with... icons... or fictions... or something! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jacksthehottest Posted September 25, 2006 Report Share Posted September 25, 2006 awww thats a great start love it, hope you update soon, can't wait to read more, excellent writing Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gypsy & Will Fan Posted September 25, 2006 Report Share Posted September 25, 2006 Great SKYKAT! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted September 25, 2006 Report Share Posted September 25, 2006 I love it. It so reminds me of Laguna Beach, the bitchiness, the different cliques. Its perfect Only thing i didnt like was Jack sleeping with Gyspy, but the rest is great, and im glad Jack and Martha are still together Please continue Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sunny Girl Posted September 25, 2006 Report Share Posted September 25, 2006 It's great SKYKAT ... I love the way you can mix the old characters with the new and make their relationships seem so believable ... Please continue with this and I'm waiting for an update of "Return to the Bay" too. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tasha7905 Posted September 25, 2006 Report Share Posted September 25, 2006 Great start. Im loving the friendship groups you have created, I can really see the girls being that bitchy. Cant wait for the party, surely hayley cant be a match for gypsy and Kit they would wipe the floor with her Hope you post more soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kase Posted September 25, 2006 Report Share Posted September 25, 2006 Definitely, continue. It brought back so many memories and I just loved how the past characters blended with the current ones. I could totally see Cassie and Martha mixing with Hayley. And I reckon Kit and Gypsy could have given those tarts a run for their money together I even thought Jack and Gypsy was pretty believable. Along with Noah, Will and Kim's friendship. Kit and Noah were just great Brings back fond memories, and what could've beens!. I really loved the Gypsy, Will, Hayley, Noah era so I'm really enjoying this. Please continue, it was a great start. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I love music Posted September 25, 2006 Report Share Posted September 25, 2006 Great start, Skykat, and, ooh, Hayley has become such a bitch! Never mind H&A, I could imagine this as a series in its own right (how does Summer Bay High sound? ) I was really laughing at the UK Big Brother Seven style bitchiness ie "Oh my god did you see what she was wearing? I thought those type of boots went out in the eighties!" manic giggles and sniggers greeted Hayley Smith's exclamation and she smiled, pleased with herself. "Not really, all the nice guys are either accounted for or have been with Gypsy." I think there's going to be a Them and Us with Kit and Gypsy on one side and Hayley and the rest on the other? Looking very interesting! And I'm really looking forward to the arrival of bad boy Kane, I just know he's going create big waves in Summer Bay... Just one small point tho - could you make a few more paragraphs? It’s awkward to read when it's all jumbled together. Other than that, my opinion is that it’s excellent and I’ll definitely read on. And great dialogue too BTW! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xsianx Posted September 25, 2006 Report Share Posted September 25, 2006 Great start! I really enjoyed it please continue Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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