Inactive User Posted December 4, 2008 Report Share Posted December 4, 2008 Great chapter. Update soon Geoff and Nicole-so cute Hope Belle will realise her feelings for Aden soon one day Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
matticus01 Posted December 5, 2008 Report Share Posted December 5, 2008 brilliant Red Ranger I knew that you weren't going to give Aden and Belle a happy ending. I would seriously eat my own arm if you did lol Those chapter were brilliant and so well written so points up for that, and the fact that I actually enjoy reading this update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LAURZY! Posted December 5, 2008 Report Share Posted December 5, 2008 That was brilliant! Really liked the ending, glad he's not being a cocky little git like he was before lol Cant wait to read more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wrongturntaken Posted December 5, 2008 Report Share Posted December 5, 2008 Loved the counselling session! Everything made a lot of sense, Aden at the end was good too, showed his maturity! Update soon! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted December 6, 2008 Report Share Posted December 6, 2008 Great chapter. Enjoyed the couneslling session Update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slade Posted December 6, 2008 Report Share Posted December 6, 2008 Sorry I haven’t posted here in a while. I can only mirror the previous comments in regards to the counselling session, although I hope you don’t do what they did on the show and suddenly decide that he’s cured after a total of two hours. You would expect something like this to go on for months. I can sense the finishing line. I’m hoping for some major event, near cataclysmic to occur. On the other hand it could just be an anticlimax. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LAURZY! Posted December 6, 2008 Report Share Posted December 6, 2008 I dont think it was a mistake that you made it longer than you first planned, the counselling sessions have been really enlightning and i think in the long run will help round things up and tie any loose ends. Does that make sense?? i know waht i mean anyway lol and its a good thing That was probably my fave chapter , the way you had Aden questioning himself and almost coming to some sort of realisation about how what he did affected people was so powerful in quite a calm way . Which i think in the long run would help him solve any unresolved issues he has. Really cant wait for the epilogue Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted December 7, 2008 Report Share Posted December 7, 2008 Great chapter. Update soon. Looking forwards to the epilogue Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rokkafella125 Posted December 7, 2008 Report Share Posted December 7, 2008 ive just read this all the way through nd must say, that it is very good. i like the way you wrote about what would have happened if aden had gone to jail. cant wait for the epilogue update soon x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Louise_2983 Posted December 7, 2008 Report Share Posted December 7, 2008 I loved that, very good twist making Aden the counsellor at the end although it is all very The OC i.e Ryan becoming Sandy in the last episode! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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