solaris Posted September 2, 2008 Report Share Posted September 2, 2008 Ok that was really well written, it was fast, emotional and conveyed the gritty emotion of the scene perfectly. BUT I really hope you don't end this in the manner that has entered my head - it's not pleasant! I guess I'll have to wait and see, but I've no doubt it will be wroth reading anyway Hehe, well, what are you thinking? I'd love to hear guesses here, cause I have the last chapter ready anyway (it was figured out long before I even started writing this fic) and I hope I haven't been too obvious here &thanks for all the nice comments btw 2 possibilities playing in my head and I don't like either of them. 1) Three person relationship, Aden + Geoff / Aden + Belle 2) Three way relationship, Aden + Geoff + Belle (and mechanics I don't even want to consider) Covered with spoilers to avoid offfending anyone Oh my gosh.Um...that'd be...interesting.Ahem.Still...looking forward to the ending. I have a vivid imagination...it's not always a good thing! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
abbie Posted September 2, 2008 Report Share Posted September 2, 2008 Heya Ive just read the whole of this fic so far and I love it!!! Despite the sadness and omg, the cliffhnagers, Im now sooo confused Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xknomex Posted September 2, 2008 Report Share Posted September 2, 2008 You cant leave it there!!!!! i am soo confused, please please please make adelle be happy!!! update ASAP Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mk1diva Posted September 3, 2008 Report Share Posted September 3, 2008 My god your so good at the cliffhanger endings but please it drives me insane lol Another great chapter update please with some happy adelleness in it lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack+martha=trooluvv Posted September 3, 2008 Report Share Posted September 3, 2008 Wow, this is really great stuff, please keep going. *waits impatiently for update* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zzazzb Posted September 3, 2008 Report Share Posted September 3, 2008 No kidding you like torturing us!! How can you possibly leave it there *joins jack+martha+trooluvv and begins tapping foot* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jen Posted September 3, 2008 Report Share Posted September 3, 2008 Oh Eli, that chapter was so intense. I could feel for them both. I have no idea what to think of or how you are going to finish this off. I'd like to think that they can salvage something, but I don't know if they can, especially if Geoff is around. One more to go! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
solaris Posted September 3, 2008 Report Share Posted September 3, 2008 Thank God you took that route! It was an brillient - if sad - ending. When are you starting your next fic? *Waits optimistically* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jen Posted September 4, 2008 Report Share Posted September 4, 2008 Awww! The ending seemed just right in the end. I have to say I was a bit sceptical about how it would alll turn out, and whether it would be a happy ending but I think this really suits them all. No one is really at fault and it is fitting that they are both allowed to go their separate ways. This fic has had me hooked from the first chapter and been an absolute pleasure to read . Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whispered_envy Posted September 4, 2008 Report Share Posted September 4, 2008 Wow! Even though you're breaking them up...I can't be mad at you! It was written so beautifully, and it all makes perfect sense. Thankyou so much for writing this fic! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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