Jen Posted September 2, 2008 Report Share Posted September 2, 2008 Amazing Eli. I just adore the way you have constructed the whole situation. It would have probably been easier to put Geoff or Aden in the wrong here, but somehow you have managed to make me feel for all the them; Geoff, Aden and Belle. I can't wait to see how everything ties itself together. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jess Posted September 2, 2008 Report Share Posted September 2, 2008 Eli, I love you. There's no point me pointing out every single thing I like - the amount of quotes would prob'ly make the internetz crash. So I'll point out what I don't like - nothing. 'Cept maybe the lack of constant updates. Seriously, you're doing an amazing job; like other people have said, it would've been so easy to make any of them in the wrong, but I just feel for all of them and desperately hope that they can sort it all out so they're all happy. Pretty impossible, I know, but I can hope, right? xo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack+martha=trooluvv Posted September 2, 2008 Report Share Posted September 2, 2008 I've just read this all through and it's absolutely fantastic, loving the Aden/Belle stuff. Even though I'm not a Gaden fan I had to admit that the scenes with those two were cute. Please keep going! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whispered_envy Posted September 2, 2008 Report Share Posted September 2, 2008 Why?!?! Why must you do that to us?!?! I need to know what they decide! It's killing me- already! But besides that, beautifully written. I really felt the confusion and heartbreak between the two. Awesome fic- can't wait for the last part! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted September 2, 2008 Report Share Posted September 2, 2008 Like...wow.I don't know what's going to happen and I don't even know what I want to happen.Looking forward to the conclusion. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
solaris Posted September 2, 2008 Report Share Posted September 2, 2008 Ok that was really well written, it was fast, emotional and conveyed the gritty emotion of the scene perfectly. BUT I really hope you don't end this in the manner that has entered my head - it's not pleasant! I guess I'll have to wait and see, but I've no doubt it will be wroth reading anyway Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taniya_K Posted September 2, 2008 Report Share Posted September 2, 2008 Are you KIDDING me?! How could you end it there?! You are so mean! I hate your perfect cliffhanger moments! They drive me crazy! Please update soon! I hope its all happy in Adelle-land! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eli Posted September 2, 2008 Report Share Posted September 2, 2008 Ok that was really well written, it was fast, emotional and conveyed the gritty emotion of the scene perfectly. BUT I really hope you don't end this in the manner that has entered my head - it's not pleasant! I guess I'll have to wait and see, but I've no doubt it will be wroth reading anyway Hehe, well, what are you thinking? I'd love to hear guesses here, cause I have the last chapter ready anyway (it was figured out long before I even started writing this fic) and I hope I haven't been too obvious here &thanks for all the nice comments btw Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
solaris Posted September 2, 2008 Report Share Posted September 2, 2008 (edited) Ok that was really well written, it was fast, emotional and conveyed the gritty emotion of the scene perfectly. BUT I really hope you don't end this in the manner that has entered my head - it's not pleasant! I guess I'll have to wait and see, but I've no doubt it will be wroth reading anyway Hehe, well, what are you thinking? I'd love to hear guesses here, cause I have the last chapter ready anyway (it was figured out long before I even started writing this fic) and I hope I haven't been too obvious here &thanks for all the nice comments btw 2 possibilities playing in my head and I don't like either of them. 1) Three person relationship, Aden + Geoff / Aden + Belle 2) Three way relationship, Aden + Geoff + Belle (and mechanics I don't even want to consider) Covered with spoilers to avoid offfending anyone Edited September 2, 2008 by solaris Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted September 2, 2008 Report Share Posted September 2, 2008 Ok that was really well written, it was fast, emotional and conveyed the gritty emotion of the scene perfectly. BUT I really hope you don't end this in the manner that has entered my head - it's not pleasant! I guess I'll have to wait and see, but I've no doubt it will be wroth reading anyway Hehe, well, what are you thinking? I'd love to hear guesses here, cause I have the last chapter ready anyway (it was figured out long before I even started writing this fic) and I hope I haven't been too obvious here &thanks for all the nice comments btw 2 possibilities playing in my head and I don't like either of them. 1) Three person relationship, Aden + Geoff / Aden + Belle 2) Three way relationship, Aden + Geoff + Belle (and mechanics I don't even want to consider) Covered with spoilers to avoid offfending anyone Oh my gosh.Um...that'd be...interesting.Ahem.Still...looking forward to the ending. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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