baby gurl Posted January 28, 2007 Report Share Posted January 28, 2007 Awww! they should shack up thats what i've put for my next chapter!!! lmao...which i dont tihnk i'll post today probably tomorrow!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
baby gurl Posted January 28, 2007 Report Share Posted January 28, 2007 heyy guys this is for paris (happy birthday!) _______________ "Really?" Jack asked. He was so happy that Martha was moving to Summer Bay. That way he would get to see her face every day. "Yeah." Martha smiled. "God he is soo hot." She thought to her self. "Um...anyway I better get going." Jack told her. "Yeah, me too." She told him. As Jack was heading towards his car Kayla stopped him. "Hey. You have a BMW?" She asked fasinated. "Yeah. You into cars?" Jack asked. "Yeah. Cars, football, sports." She told him. "Whats your favourite car?" Jack asked. This was great, he thought. Not only was he attracted to Martha but her children were great. "Definatly Ferrarri." She exclaimed. "I agree. That and a Porsche." "Sorry to break up the conversation here but we better go." "No mum...come on please..." Kayla begged. "Hey, why don't you come in the 'Bemma' with me and I'll drop you home." Jack suggested. "Sick!" Kayla exclaimed. ______________________ "What do you say?" Martha asked. "Thanks Jack!" She said. "No problem." "Why don't you two go inside and I'll be in a minute." Martha told the girls. "So..um..you doing anything this evening?" Jack asked. "No...not that I know of." "Well...I was wondering if you..maybe wanted to go out for dinner." "Yeah I'd love to. I'll ask grandad if he can babysit." __________ Sorry that chapter's crap!!!! you will all love the next chapter....what a big clue!! please reply...xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-ParaisGal- Posted January 28, 2007 Report Share Posted January 28, 2007 There we go! I was waiting for that! Great going. As Jack was heading towards his car Kayla stopped him. "Hey. You have a BMW?" She asked fasinated. "Yeah. You into cars?" Jack asked. "Yeah. Cars, football, sports." She told him. "Whats your favourite car?" Jack asked. This was great, he thought. Not only was he attracted to Martha but her children were great. "Definatly Ferrarri." She exclaimed. "I agree. That and a Porsche." I loved that. Martha's daughter is a car girl! "Hey, why don't you come in the 'Bemma' with me and I'll drop you home." Jack suggested. If only I was Kayla.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
baby gurl Posted January 28, 2007 Report Share Posted January 28, 2007 lmfao!!! i wish i was! i can tell u that!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicom Posted January 28, 2007 Report Share Posted January 28, 2007 Just caught up, and this fic has really made me laugh. These kids have foul mouths - especially for 10 year olds. lol. Blinkin' hilarious though. Paris' birthday? Happy birthday Paris! Anyway, i have some catching up to do. I hope that man dies. Ooh, J&M. They like each other. I think this is the only fic that I actually like Martha's kids in. I usually find them annoying, but these are very funny. Looking forward to your next update! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
baby gurl Posted January 28, 2007 Report Share Posted January 28, 2007 thanks nicole next update hopefully tomorrow!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted January 28, 2007 Report Share Posted January 28, 2007 yay theyre going out Cant wait for the date Great chapt More please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
>>Emma<< Posted January 28, 2007 Report Share Posted January 28, 2007 Yay a date! Hope Jack and Martha get together properly! More soon please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
baby gurl Posted January 29, 2007 Report Share Posted January 29, 2007 hey guys heres the next chapter hope you enjoy!!! you will until the last couple of sentences!! :) -0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0- {Knock knock.} Jack stood outside Martha's door ready for their first date. Well he hoped it was a date. He waited a couple of seconds until the door swung open. "Hey." Martha greeted as she let Jack through the door. "Hey, you look great." Jack told her. "Thanks. I'm not fully ready yet, so take a seat and if you need anything Kayla will get it for you." "Why me?" Kayla protested. "Because I'm helping mum get ready." Jade told her sticking her toung out. "Quiet both of you." Martha ordered as she walked through the door. Jack watched as Jade followed her. He then saw Kayla sitting on the sofa flicking through the channels. "So." Jack muttered. "Yeah?" Kayla asked. "Do you..play any sports?" Jack asked trying to make conversation. "Yeah. Baseball, Football and Tennis." "Wow. You like your sports don't you?" "Yeah. So you want to take me for a spin in the 'Beema?'" Kayla asked hoping Jack would say yes. "No, Kayla he isn't going to take you in the 'Beema'" Martha told her walking through to the living room. "Wow. She looks beautiful." Jack thought. Martha was wearing a floaty white dress which came up to her knee's with her hair sitting neatly in place. "You look beautiful." Jack smiled. "Thanks." She smiled. "Umm...we got to wait until grandad gets here." Martha told him trying to hide her face that was blushing. "Ok, no problem. The reservations arn't until 8pm." "Yeah so you still have some time to take me for a spin." Kayla told him. "Kayla." Martha warned. "No its fine. How about you give me a ring when your grandad comes and until then I'll take the girls for a spin." "No thank you." Jade siad politly. "Me and cars do not go together." "Cool, lets go." Kayla shouted running to the door. Jack laughed as he followed her out. -0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0- "Wow, its beautiful here." Martha exclaimed. "You shouldn't have gone through all this trouble." "Yeah is is beautiful here. But your much more beautiful." Jack told her. Martha giggled. "You really know how to make a lady feel good about herself don't you?" Jack laughed. "I'm really enjoying myself." Jack told her. "Yeah me too." Just then Jack's phone started to go off. "Excuse me." "Sure." "Hello. Yeah. What? No way. Ok. Why? But...Ok be there soon." Martha looked at Jack and by his expression she could see that the news wasn't good. ____________________________ Hope you all enjoyed it. PLEASE READ AND REPLY! xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
>>Emma<< Posted January 30, 2007 Report Share Posted January 30, 2007 Fuj you big poop. What have you done now? They can never be happy! Never! Kayla is funny, no naughty words in that chapter. Please update soon. Not that I want to read the upset that will be in the next chapter, but you know, just update so that I can cry my little eyes out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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