baby gurl Posted January 20, 2007 Report Share Posted January 20, 2007 Story Title: The Gettaway To Love Type of story: long fic Main Characters: Jack and Martha BTTB rating: T Genre: Drama/Romance Does story include spoilers: No Any warnings: V/D SC L Summary: Martha has two kids. She has a abusive partner and is trying to get away from him. She wants to find love again. Can she? Hey guys i'm writing another j/m fic puely because my other one is a sad fic so i thought i would write a happy fic which i hope turns out happy! lol...heres the first chapter so can you please be honest with me if i should carry on or not! xx chapter one “Whose is it?” Gregg practically screamed. “What do you mean ‘whose is it’?” Martha asked totally shocked. “Well it’s obviously not mine.” He told her. “Oh no it can’t possibly be yours because you could never do anything like that” Martha scoffed. “Don’t talk to me like that!” Gregg shouted. “Or what? You’re going to hit me? Like you did earlier, or like last night?” Martha shouted. “I told you they were both accidents.” Gregg told her quietly. “Accidents?” Martha scoffed. “How can you hit someone accidentally twice?” “Just shut up!” “Or what?” Martha asked trying to shout confident. “You know what.” He shouted. The next thing Martha could see was her twin daughters Jade and Kayla around her. “Mum are you ok?” Kayla asked concerned. “Where is he?” Martha asked. “He’s gone, don’t worry.” Jade assured her mum. “We have to get out of here.” Martha told the girls. “Where?” They both asked in unison. “To Summer Bay.” Martha told them. please reply with (HONEST) views! xxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sarah_Lewis Posted January 20, 2007 Report Share Posted January 20, 2007 Fuj!!!! that was awesome ! Cant wait for the next bit !!!!! =p update soonish please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-ParaisGal- Posted January 20, 2007 Report Share Posted January 20, 2007 Keep going! Make Mac go to Jacky, and seek comfort Fuj! Hehe, leave the Macca-immatator. This is great. Update ASAP! BTW, did you get my PM Fuj? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
baby gurl Posted January 20, 2007 Report Share Posted January 20, 2007 lmao thanx emma and paris! yh paris i did get ur pm...im actually supposed to be doing h/w @ the moment but i'll be on msn l8er...hopefully! xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xsianx Posted January 20, 2007 Report Share Posted January 20, 2007 Martha should go get more than comfort with Jack. Go make the bed creek Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gawguss_tiff Posted January 21, 2007 Report Share Posted January 21, 2007 ^^^ get your mind out of the gutter sian lol .... well i thought this fic was meant to be happy missy :glare: she is getting beaten up ... not cool lol well... im hoping next chapter will be happier right?... and im also hoping that Jack will be in it or i'll have to resort to my old tricks AKA threatening you!!!!! lol excellent start huni update asap xoxox Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted January 21, 2007 Report Share Posted January 21, 2007 I thought this was a happy JM fic, and so far we've seen Martha in an abusive relationship with twin daughters Great start though. Bring on Jacky boy. Is he the girls daddy?? More please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
linzie_mac01 Posted January 21, 2007 Report Share Posted January 21, 2007 This sounds like a great start, hope Jack is going to be in the next chapter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
>>Emma<< Posted January 21, 2007 Report Share Posted January 21, 2007 Great start Fuj I can't wait for more, sounds really interesting. More soon please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
baby gurl Posted January 21, 2007 Report Share Posted January 21, 2007 thanks everyone; emma,paris, sian, tiffy,tasha, linzie and emma!!! every1's saying that this is suppose to be a happy fic and trust me guys it WILL be!! i had to write that chapter so you all know how it starts and yes jack will be in the next chapter! and no jack isn't the dad! and there will be a chapter later on...(i hope) *out of breath* xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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