xsianx Posted January 23, 2007 Report Share Posted January 23, 2007 He does have a nice ass lol My neck hurts. Good writing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gawguss_tiff Posted January 24, 2007 Report Share Posted January 24, 2007 OMG!!!!! what a sick PERVE!!!... that is soooo wrong, aww i hope they move in with Jack ok so maybe thats a lil soon lol but theres always hope lol i hope martha and her two kiddies move to summber bay that will be excellent. hahaha hilarious when she thought the nice ass thing lmao UPDATE ASAP xoxox Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-ParaisGal- Posted January 24, 2007 Report Share Posted January 24, 2007 Be nice, and make everything go well. Please? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted January 24, 2007 Report Share Posted January 24, 2007 hehe Constable Holden does have a nice a$$ Great chapts. Gregg is a loser More please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
foxychic99 Posted January 24, 2007 Report Share Posted January 24, 2007 i cant belive someone would want to look at little kids that grose, i hope Martha and the twins get away from him and QUICKLY cant wait for more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
baby gurl Posted January 25, 2007 Report Share Posted January 25, 2007 hey guys sorry i didn't update yesterday i wasn't feeling very well and im still not 100% but im updating because i have told a few people (you know who you are!) on msn that i will update... ...thanks to everyone who replied;emma,paras,miz sian, miss tiffy,tasha and foxychic99. here it is:not alot going on i dont think because i dont know how much im writing! WARNING: MAY CONTAIN LANGUAGE THAT ISN'T SUITABLE FOR YOUNGER READERS. you have been warned! enjoy!! --------- "I know your upset but you really need to calm down." Jack tried to explain. "Upset?!" Martha yelled. "I''m not f****** upset im f****** angry!" She roared. "Alright I know your 'angry' but you need to calm down. Not just for you but for your kids aswell." Martha sighed she new he was right. "So what do you suggest I do?" Martha asked calmed down. "I suggest you go home pack your things and get out of here." "Fine." She muttered, leaving the room. "Holden." someone called. " Jack turned to face Nick. "The boss told me you can leave early to get packed." Jack smiled. "Finally I can go and see dad and Luc." He thought to himself. ________________________ ON THE ROAD. It was 2pm and Martha and the girls were on their way to see their grandad. "Mum how long left?" Jade whined. "Kayla's gameboy is doing my head in!" "Yeah well don't you think you do my head in with you singing along to your ipod?" Kayla argued. "Excuse me I have talent, which is something you don't have." "Talent?!" Kayla scoffed. "Yeah talent. It doesn't take a scientist to kick a bloody football around!" "Shut up or I'll...." "Stop it right there!" Martha shouted. "Unless you both want to be grounded as soon as we enter summer bay I suggest to you both to shut up, and we'll be here..."Martha stopped. "Soon." She grumbled. Her car had stopped for the third time that week. She slowly moved the car to the side of the high way. "Oh for f***'s sake, mum, why can't you just buy another car?!" Both Jade and Kayla moaned in unison. "Don't worry, I'm sure its not that bad." Martha told them getting of the car. As she opened the front of the car up she could see the grey smoke letting its self out. Just then a blue BMW stopped behind her, and a guy came out. It was Jack. "Need some help?" He asked smiling as he walked towards her. "No I'm fine thanks." She smiled. She knew she wasn't but she didn't want Jack to think that she couldn't handle it. "Yes she does!" The girls shouted through the opened window. ___________________________ Here you go guys! Thats enough for today I think (and hope!) Please read and reply! xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
>>Emma<< Posted January 25, 2007 Report Share Posted January 25, 2007 Yay you updated. Finally they meet. Hehe Jade and Kayla are funny. How old are they? They know some naughty words Update soon please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
baby gurl Posted January 25, 2007 Report Share Posted January 25, 2007 thanks emma! jade and kayla are both 10 (i think) not really thought about it!! next upate either tomorrow or saturday..xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xsianx Posted January 25, 2007 Report Share Posted January 25, 2007 Aww good update The girls are so adorable! Hope you get better soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
baby gurl Posted January 25, 2007 Report Share Posted January 25, 2007 thanks miz sian....im feeling a little better thanks hopefully i update soon x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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