Zetti Posted February 3, 2007 Report Share Posted February 3, 2007 thanks for the comment zetti lol my pleasure Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vale4eva Posted February 3, 2007 Report Share Posted February 3, 2007 Hey people! im Rachel, a newbie! well i say a newbie, i come on hear and read everything all the time, but i finally decided to post something! Great story! And like everyone else, im thinking its morag! shes the best in the business right! Update when you get chance! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BritishFan Posted February 3, 2007 Report Share Posted February 3, 2007 Hi Rachel *waves*. Please update soon Fuj...please please...you just got to soon...wee need to know if it is Morag. Hayley xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gawguss_tiff Posted February 4, 2007 Report Share Posted February 4, 2007 that was great huni cant wait for the next update xxoo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
baby gurl Posted February 4, 2007 Report Share Posted February 4, 2007 thanks guys!! heyyy rachel *waves to rachel* i will update soon...cant at the moment i'm look aftering my baby sister and got some h/w to do...there should hopefully be an update tonight *fingers crossed* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gawguss_tiff Posted February 4, 2007 Report Share Posted February 4, 2007 GO ON MSN NOW!!!! lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
baby gurl Posted February 4, 2007 Report Share Posted February 4, 2007 Martha and Jack turned around to see a tall slim figure. Martha's face dropped. "Who are you?" Jack asked. "Ask Martha." She told Jack looking at Martha who was still in shock. "Martha?" Jack asked. "Jack this is Gregg's Sister May." "Listen Martha I know your probably thinking why the hell I would help you but I know what Gregg was like and the thing is if I was in that posistion then I would have done the same thing. I'm here to help. Listen how about you take some time to think about it and meet me at the surf club say twelve with your answer." And with that May left. ________ "Don't tell me your actually thinking of having her as your brief." Jack asked as he and Martha walked into her apartment. "Come on Jack she looked genuin enough." "Martha. You killed your boyfriend. Do you really think that his sister's going to let it go that easily?" Jack asked trying to make her see sense. "Yeah but Jack you heard her on the beach. She told me that she would have done the same thing." "Martha you are not having her as your brief." Jack told her. "And who are you to tell me what to do?" Martha shouted. _________ It was twelve o'clock and Martha and May had just ordered drinks. "So." May asked taking a sip of her juice. "Have you thought about my offer?" "Umm....yeah I have." "So. Are you going to let me help you?" Martha hesitated. "Ok." She forced a smile. _______ *Is May really helping Martha? please reply. x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beckyboo Posted February 4, 2007 Report Share Posted February 4, 2007 WOW His sister gonna help Martha I dont think so Update soon MSN now!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xsianx Posted February 4, 2007 Report Share Posted February 4, 2007 No Martha, you silly girl! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
>>Emma<< Posted February 4, 2007 Report Share Posted February 4, 2007 I did not see that coming... I don't think she is genuine, but I may be wrong! Please update soon, great chapter! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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